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  • Can anyone help me with this - I change the back ground and my people exit but the back ground pops up again after @pause for a beat & has my characters there again. I'm unsure how to make it so that they do not pop up again after the fade out. Anyone know?

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    • Apes
      Apes commented
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      Hi, Sara can you post your script?

  • Bad Script End: Make sure you have dialog after a character name








    #beat ends
    #beat starts
    @KATELYNN walks to screen left and remove KATELYNN
    @transition fade out black
    #beat ends
    #beat starts
    EXT. HYDRANGEA LANE - DAY
    CAR ANGLE VINTAGE ----------> This is where the problem is but it's not a character it's an overlay, how do I fix this????
    #beat ends

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    • Apes
      Apes commented
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      EXT. HYDRANGEA LANE - DAY with CAR ANGLE VINTAGE

  • I used this in my story,check it out - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5173979191050240

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    • What do you do if you script template for character customization has spelling errors and there is no spelling error I put the script in google to check spelling but it still has 628 spelling errors Im just confused I'm stuck

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      • This my template for CC and I'm stuck it say I have 628 spelling I just don't understand I check the spelling in google no errors


        Susan enters from left to screen center AND SUSAN faces forward

        label avatar_0


        NARRATOR
        Susan what's your look?
        choice
        "Skin Tone" {
        goto bodyColor_0
        }
        "Hair" {
        goto hair_0
        }
        "Eyes" {
        goto eyes_0
        }
        "Eyebrows" {
        goto brows_0
        }
        "Face Shape"{
        goto face_0
        }
        "Nose" {
        goto nose_0
        }
        "Mouth" {
        goto mouth_0
        }
        <PREMIUM> "This is perfect!" {
        goto avatar_end
        }
        label bodyColor_0
        @zoom reset

        NARRATOR
        What skin color would you like?
        choice
        "Beige" {
        #
        Susan changes bodyColor into Beige
        Susan starts idle_happy
        goto bodyColor_0
        }
        "Olive" {
        Susan changes bodyColor into Olive
        Susan starts idle_happy
        goto bodyColor_0
        }
        "Taupe"{
        Susan changes bodyColor into Taupe
        Susan starts idle_happy
        goto bodyColor_0
        }
        "Mocha" {
        Susan changes bodyColor into Mocha
        Susan starts idle_happy
        goto bodyColor_0
        }
        "Sable" {
        Susan changes bodyColor into Sable
        Susan starts idle_happy
        goto bodyColor_0
        }
        <PREMIUM>"This looks good!"{
        Susan starts cheer_loop
        goto avatar_0
        }<GREEN>"Last Page"{
        goto bodyColor_2
        }<GREEN>"Next Page"{
        goto bodyColor_1
        }

        label bodyColor_1
        NARRATOR
        What skin color would you like?
        choice
        "Ivory" {
        Susan changes bodyColor into Ivory
        Susan starts idle_happy
        goto bodyColor_1
        }
        "Fair" {
        Susan changes bodyColor into Fair
        Susan starts idle_happy
        goto bodyColor_1
        }
        "Caramel"{
        Susan changes bodyColor into Caramel
        Susan starts idle_happy
        goto bodyColor_1
        }
        "Toffee" {
        Susan changes bodyColor into Toffee
        Susan starts idle_happy
        goto bodyColor_1
        }
        "Dark" {
        Susan changes bodyColor into Dark
        Susan starts idle_happy
        goto bodyColor_1
        }
        <PREMIUM>"This looks good!"{
        Susan starts cheer_loop
        goto avatar_0
        }<GREEN>"Last Page"{
        goto bodyColor_0
        }<GREEN>"Next Page"{
        goto bodyColor_2
        }
        label bodyColor_2
        NARRATOR
        What skin color would you like?
        choice
        "Dune" {
        Susan changes bodyColor into Dune
        Susan starts idle_happy
        goto bodyColor_2
        }
        "Light" {
        Susan changes bodyColor into Light
        Susan starts idle_happy
        goto bodyColor_2
        }
        "Honey"{
        Susan changes bodyColor into Honey
        Susan starts idle_happy
        goto bodyColor_2
        }
        "Umber" {
        Susan changes bodyColor into Umber
        Susan starts idle_happy
        goto bodyColor_2
        }
        "Chestnut" {
        Susan changes bodyColor into Chestnut
        Susan starts idle_happy
        goto bodyColor_2
        }
        <PREMIUM>"This looks good!"{
        Susan starts cheer_loop
        goto avatar_0
        }<GREEN>"Last Page"{
        goto bodyColor_1
        }
        <GREEN>"Next Page"{
        goto bodyColor_0
        }




        label brows_0
        @zoom reset
        @zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
        Susan starts idle_arms_crossed
        NARRATOR
        What eyebrow shape would you like?
        choice
        "Classic Natural"{
        Susan changes eyebrows into Classic Natural
        goto brows_0
        }"Defined Natural"{
        Susan changes eyebrows into Defined Natural
        goto brows_0
        }"Mature Round"{
        Susan changes eyebrows into Mature Round
        goto brows_0
        }"Seductive Arch"{
        Susan changes eyebrows into Seductive Arch
        goto brows_0
        }"Seductive Round"{
        Susan changes eyebrows into Seductive Round
        goto brows_0
        }"Thick Flat"{
        Susan changes eyebrows into Thick Flat
        goto brows_0
        }"Thin Round"{
        Susan changes eyebrows into Thin Round
        goto brows_0
        }<PREMIUM> "Looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }
        label face_0
        @zoom reset
        @zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
        Susan starts idle_happy
        NARRATOR
        What face shape would you like?
        choice
        "Defined Heart" {
        Susan changes face into Defined Heart
        goto face_0
        }
        "Defined Round" {
        Susan changes face into Defined Round
        goto face_0
        }
        "Diamond" {
        Susan changes face into Diamond
        goto face_0
        }
        "Oval" {
        Susan changes face into Oval
        goto face_0
        }
        "Round" {
        Susan changes face into Round
        goto face_0
        }
        "Soft Heart" {
        Susan changes face into Soft Heart
        goto face_0
        }
        "Square" {
        Susan changes face into Square
        goto face_0
        }
        <PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }
        label eyes_0
        Susan starts idle
        @zoom reset
        @zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
        NARRATOR
        What eye shape would you like?
        choice
        "Mature Round" {
        Susan changes eyes into Mature Round
        goto eyes_0
        }
        "Round Luxe" {
        Susan changes eyes into Round Luxe
        goto eyes_0
        }
        "Slender Natural" {
        Susan changes eyes into Slender Natural
        goto eyes_0
        }
        "Upturned Bold" {
        Susan changes eyes into Upturned Bold
        goto eyes_0
        }
        "Upturned Feline" {
        Susan changes eyes into Upturned Feline
        goto eyes_0
        }
        "Upturned Luxe" {
        Susan changes eyes into Upturned Luxe
        goto eyes_0
        }
        <GREEN>"Select a color."{
        goto eyesColor_0
        }
        <PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }
        label eyesColor_0
        Susan starts idle
        NARRATOR
        What color should your eyes be?
        choice
        "Auburn"{
        Susan changes eyesColor into Auburn
        goto eyesColor_0
        }"Black"{
        Susan changes eyesColor into Hickory
        goto eyesColor_0
        }"Blue" {
        Susan changes eyesColor into Blue
        goto eyesColor_0
        }
        "Brown" {
        Susan changes eyesColor into Brown
        goto eyesColor_0
        }
        "Green" {
        Susan changes eyesColor into Green
        goto eyesColor_0
        }"Grey" {
        Susan changes eyesColor into Black
        goto eyesColor_0
        }
        <PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }
        label mouth_0
        @zoom reset
        @zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
        Susan starts idle
        NARRATOR
        What mouth shape would you like?
        choice
        "Blossom Lips" {
        Susan changes mouth into Blossom Lips
        Susan starts shush
        goto mouth_0
        }"Classic" {
        Susan changes mouth into Classic
        Susan starts shush
        goto mouth_0
        }"Classic Slender" {
        Susan changes mouth into Classic Slender
        Susan starts shush
        goto mouth_0
        }"Full Round" {
        Susan changes mouth into Full Round
        Susan starts shush
        goto mouth_0
        }"Mature Medium" {
        Susan changes mouth into Mature Medium
        Susan starts shush
        goto mouth_0
        }"Thick" {
        Susan changes mouth into Thick
        Susan starts shush
        goto mouth_0
        }<GREEN>"Select color."{
        goto mouthColor_0
        }
        <PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }
        label mouthColor_0
        NARRATOR
        What color lips would you like?
        choice
        "Blush" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Blush
        goto mouthColor_0
        }"Champagne" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Champagne
        goto mouthColor_0
        }"Olive" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Olive
        goto mouthColor_0
        }"Toffee" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Toffee
        goto mouthColor_0
        }"Taupe"{
        Susan changes mouthColor into Taupe
        goto mouthColor_0
        }<PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }<GREEN>"Change lip shape."{
        goto mouth_0
        }<GREEN>"Next Page."{
        goto mouthColor_1
        }
        label mouthColor_1
        NARRATOR
        What color lips would you like?
        choice
        "Mocha" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Mocha
        goto mouthColor_1
        }"Rosewood" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Rosewood
        goto mouthColor_1
        }"Dark" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Dark
        goto mouthColor_1
        }"Chestnut" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Chestnut
        goto mouthColor_1
        }"Sable"{
        Susan changes mouthColor into Sable
        goto mouthColor_1
        }<PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }<GREEN>"Change lip shape."{
        goto mouth_0
        }<GREEN>"Next Page."{
        goto mouthColor_2
        }
        label mouthColor_2
        NARRATOR
        What color lips would you like?
        choice
        "Bubblegum Pink" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Bubblegum Pink
        goto mouthColor_2
        }"Orange Crush" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Orange Crush
        goto mouthColor_2
        }"Rose"{
        Susan changes mouthColor into Rose
        goto mouthColor_2
        }"Raspberry"{
        Susan changes mouthColor into Raspberry
        goto mouthColor_2
        }"Cherry Red"{
        Susan changes mouthColor into Cherry Red
        goto mouthColor_2
        }<PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }<GREEN>"Change lip shape."{
        goto mouth_0
        }<GREEN>"Next Page."{
        goto mouthColor_3
        }
        label mouthColor_3
        NARRATOR
        What color lips would you like?
        choice
        "Dusty Rose"{
        Susan changes mouthColor into Dusty Rose
        goto mouthColor_3
        }"Bordeaux" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Bordeaux
        goto mouthColor_3
        }"Wine" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Wine
        goto mouthColor_3
        }"Scarlet" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Scarlet
        goto mouthColor_3
        }"Plum" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Plum
        goto mouthColor_3
        }<PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }<GREEN>"Change lip shape."{
        goto mouth_0
        }<GREEN>"Next Page."{
        goto mouthColor_4
        }
        label mouthColor_4
        NARRATOR
        What lip color would you like?
        choice
        "Lavender"{
        Susan changes mouthColor into Lavender
        goto mouthColor_4
        }"Sea Foam" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Seafoam
        goto mouthColor_4
        }"Sky Blue" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Sky Blue
        goto mouthColor_4
        }"Emerald" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Emerald
        goto mouthColor_4
        }"Azure" {
        Susan changes mouthColor into Azure
        goto mouthColor_4
        }<PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }<GREEN>"Change lip shape."{
        goto mouth_0
        }<GREEN>"First Page."{
        goto mouthColor_0
        }
        label hair_0
        @zoom reset
        @zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
        NARRATOR
        Which hair style would you like?
        choice
        "Buzzed"{
        Susan changes hair into Buzzed Hair
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_0
        }"Short Shaved Sides" {
        Susan changes hair into Shaved Sides
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_0
        }"Messy Pixie" {
        Susan changes hair into Messy Pixie
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_0
        }"Slicked Back" {
        Susan changes hair into Long Slicked Back Hair
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_0
        }"Twist Hair" {
        Susan changes hair into Twist Hair
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_0
        }<PREMIUM>"This looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }<GREEN>"Change Color."{
        goto label hairColor_0
        }<GREEN>"More Styles."{
        goto hair_1
        }
        label hair_1
        NARRATOR
        Which hair style would you like?
        choice
        "Bed head" {
        Susan changes hair into Shaggy Long Hair
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_1
        }"Faux Hawk"{
        Susan changes hair into Long Faux Hawk
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_1
        }"Classic Bob" {
        Susan changes hair into Classic Bob
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_1
        }"Dreadlocks" {
        Susan changes hair into Long Dreadlocks
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_1
        }"Straight Bob" {
        Susan changes hair into Straight Bob
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_1
        }<PREMIUM>"This looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }<GREEN>"Change Color."{
        goto label hairColor_0
        }<GREEN>"More Styles."{
        goto hair_2
        }
        label hair_2
        NARRATOR
        Which hair style would you like?
        choice
        "Layered Hair" {
        Susan changes hair into Layered Hair
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_2
        }"Long Feathered" {
        Susan changes hair into Long Feathered
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_2
        }"Long Straight Hair" {
        Susan changes hair into Long Straight Hair
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_2
        }"Straight" {
        Susan changes hair into Straight
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_2
        }"Long Braids" {
        Susan changes hair into Long Braids
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_2
        }<PREMIUM>"This looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }<GREEN>"Change Color."{
        goto label hairColor_0
        }<GREEN>"More Styles."{
        goto hair_3
        }
        label hair_3
        NARRATOR
        Which hair style would you like?
        choice
        "Natural Curls"{
        Susan changes hair into Natural Curls
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_3
        }"Beach Wave" {
        Susan changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_3
        }"Diva Curls" {
        Susan changes hair into Diva Curls
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_3
        }"Long Curly Hair" {
        Susan changes hair into Long Curly Hair
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_3
        }"Rebel Half Shaved" {
        Susan changes hair into Rebel Half Shaved Hairstyle
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_3
        }<PREMIUM>"This looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }<GREEN>"Change Color."{
        goto label hairColor_0
        }<GREEN>"More Styles."{
        goto hair_4
        }
        label hair_4
        NARRATOR
        Which hair style would you like?
        choice
        "Casual Braided Pigtails" {
        Susan changes hair into Casual Braided Pigtails
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_4
        }"Styled Corn Rows" {
        Susan changes hair into Styled Corn Rows
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_4
        }"Messy Back Bun" {
        Susan changes hair into Messy Back Bun
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_4
        }"Pulled Back"{
        Susan changes hair into Monday Morning Updo
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_4
        }"Urban Punk Ponytail"{
        Susan changes hair into Urban Punk Ponytail
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_4
        }<PREMIUM>"This looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }<GREEN>"Change Color."{
        goto label hairColor_0
        }<GREEN>"More Styles."{
        goto hair_5
        }
        label hair_5
        NARRATOR
        Which hair style would you like?
        choice
        "Cornrow Bun" {
        Susan changes hair into Cornrow Bun
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_5
        }"High Ponytail" {
        Susan changes hair into High Ponytail
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_4
        }"Suburban Bubble" {
        Susan changes hair into Suburban Bubble
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_1
        }"Short Curly Hair" {
        Susan changes hair into Short Curly Hair
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_3
        }"Ponytail Locks"{
        Susan changes hair into Ponytail Locks
        Susan starts primp_condescend
        goto hair_5
        }<PREMIUM>"This looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }<GREEN>"Change Color."{
        goto label hairColor_0
        }<GREEN>"First Styles."{
        goto hair_0
        }


        label hairColor_0
        NARRATOR
        What hair color would you like?
        choice
        "Auburn" {
        Susan changes hairColor into Auburn
        goto hairColor_0
        }"Black" {
        Susan changes hairColor into Charcoal
        goto hairColor_0
        }"Blond" {
        Susan changes hairColor into Blond
        goto hairColor_0
        }"Chestnut"{
        Susan changes hairColor into Chestnut
        goto hairColor_0
        }"Fawn" {
        Susan changes hairColor into Fawn
        goto hairColor_0
        }<PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }<GREEN>"Back To Styles."{
        goto hair_0
        }<GREEN>"More Colors"{
        goto hairColor_1
        }

        label hairColor_1
        NARRATOR
        What hair color would you like?
        choice
        "Mint" {
        Susan changes hairColor into Mint
        goto hairColor_1
        }"Blue" {
        Susan changes hairColor into Blasting Blue
        goto hairColor_1
        }"Pink" {
        Susan changes hairColor into Pop Pink
        goto hairColor_1
        }"Grey"{
        Susan changes hairColor into Grey
        goto hairColor_1
        }"Purple" {
        Susan changes hairColor into Punky Purple
        goto hairColor_1
        }<PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }<GREEN>"Back To Styles."{
        goto hair_0
        }<GREEN>"More Colors"{
        goto hairColor_0
        }

        label nose_0
        @zoom reset
        @zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
        NARRATOR
        What nose would you like?
        choice
        "Bulb" {
        Susan changes nose into Bulb
        Susan starts idle
        goto nose_0
        }
        "Elven" {
        Susan changes nose into Elven
        Susan starts idle
        goto nose_0
        }
        "Grecian" {
        Susan changes nose into Grecian
        Susan starts idle
        goto nose_0
        }
        "Mature Round" {
        Susan changes nose into Mature Round
        Susan starts idle
        goto nose_0
        }
        "Refined" {
        Susan changes nose into Refined
        Susan starts idle
        goto nose_0
        }
        "Roman" {
        Susan changes nose into Roman
        Susan starts idle
        goto nose_0
        }
        "Round" {
        Susan changes nose into Round
        Susan starts idle
        goto nose_0
        }
        <PREMIUM>"Looks great!"{
        goto avatar_0
        }

        label avatar_end
        @zoom reset
        &SUSAN exits right
        #}



        # Avatar - Male {

        label boy_change_0
        #@zoom reset
        NARRATOR
        What would you like to change?
        choice
        "Skin Tone" {
        goto boybodyColor_0
        }"Hair" {
        @zoom on 162 369 to 170% in 0
        goto boy_hair_0
        } "Eyes" {
        @zoom on 162 369 to 170% in 0
        goto boy_eyes_0
        }
        "Eyebrows" {
        @zoom on 162 369 to 170% in 0
        goto boy_brows_0
        }
        "Face Shape"{
        @zoom on 162 369 to 170% in 0
        goto boy_face_0
        }
        "Nose" {
        @zoom on 162 369 to 170% in 0
        goto boy_nose_0
        }
        "Mouth" {
        @zoom on 162 369 to 170% in 0
        goto boy_mouth_0
        }
        <GREEN> "He looks perfect." {
        goto boy_avatar_end
        }
        label boybodyColor_0
        @zoom reset
        #If TONY has siblings or parents, place them off screen here EG:
        #@SIBLING stands screen center in zone 4
        #Then in each skin color, change their skin color as well
        #Be sure to remove them at the end.
        NARRATOR
        What skin color would you like?
        choice
        "Beige" {
        #Remember to change family skin, mouth, and hair to match in each area!
        #@FAMILY changes bodyColor into Beige
        #@FAMILY changes into mouthColor Rose
        #@FAMILY changes into hairColor Chestnut
        tony changes bodyColor into Beige
        tony starts idle_happy
        goto boybodyColor_0
        }
        "Olive" {
        tony changes bodyColor into Olive
        tony starts idle_happy
        goto boybodyColor_0
        }
        "Taupe"{
        tony changes bodyColor into Taupe
        tony starts idle_happy
        goto boybodyColor_0
        }
        "Mocha" {
        tony changes bodyColor into Mocha
        tony starts idle_happy
        goto boybodyColor_0
        }
        "Sable" {
        tony changes bodyColor into Sable
        tony starts idle_happy
        goto boybodyColor_0
        }
        <PREMIUM>"This looks good!"{
        tony starts cheer_loop
        goto boy_change_0
        }<GREEN>"Last Page"{
        goto boybodyColor_2
        }<GREEN>"Next Page"{
        goto boybodyColor_1
        }

        label boybodyColor_1
        NARRATOR
        What skin color would you like?
        choice
        "Ivory" {
        #Remember to change family skin, mouth, and hair to match in each area!
        tony changes bodyColor into Ivory
        tony starts idle_happy
        goto boybodyColor_1
        }
        "Fair" {
        tony changes bodyColor into Fair
        tony starts idle_happy
        goto boybodyColor_1
        }
        "Caramel"{
        tony changes bodyColor into Caramel
        tony starts idle_happy
        goto boybodyColor_1
        }
        "Toffee" {
        tony changes bodyColor into Toffee
        tony starts idle_happy
        goto boybodyColor_1
        }
        "Dark" {
        tony changes bodyColor into Dark
        tony starts idle_happy
        goto boybodyColor_1
        }
        <PREMIUM>"This looks good!"{
        tony starts cheer_loop
        goto boy_change_0
        }<GREEN>"Last Page"{
        goto boybodyColor_0
        }<GREEN>"Next Page"{
        goto boybodyColor_2
        }
        label boybodyColor_2
        NARRATOR
        What skin color would you like?
        choice
        "Dune" {
        #Remember to change family skin, mouth, and hair to match in each area!
        tony changes bodyColor into Dune
        tony starts idle_happy
        goto boybodyColor_2
        }
        "Light" {
        tony changes bodyColor into Light
        tony starts idle_happy
        goto boybodyColor_2
        }
        "Honey"{
        tony changes bodyColor into Honey
        tony starts idle_happy
        goto boybodyColor_2
        }
        "Umber" {
        tony changes bodyColor into Umber
        tony starts idle_happy
        goto boybodyColor_2
        }
        "Chestnut" {
        tony changes bodyColor into Chestnut
        tony starts idle_happy
        goto boybodyColor_2
        }
        <PREMIUM>"This looks good!"{
        tony starts cheer_loop
        goto boy_change_0
        }<GREEN>"Last Page"{
        goto boybodyColor_1
        }<GREEN>"Next Page"{
        goto boybodyColor_0
        }

        label boy_brows_0
        tony starts idle_arms_crossed
        NARRATOR
        What kind of eyebrows do you have?
        choice
        "Bold"{
        tony changes eyebrows into Straight Bold
        goto boy_brows_0
        }"Thick"{
        tony changes eyebrows into Thick Arch
        goto boy_brows_0
        }"Sharp"{
        tony changes eyebrows into Medium Sharp
        goto boy_brows_0
        }"Tapered"{
        tony changes eyebrows into Thick Tapered
        goto boy_brows_0
        }"Narrow"{
        tony changes eyebrows into Thin Arch
        goto boy_brows_0
        }<GREEN> "Looks good!"{
        goto boy_change_0
        }
        label boy_face_0
        tony starts idle_happy
        NARRATOR
        What does your face look like?
        choice
        "Athletic" {
        tony changes face into Athletic Square Jaw
        goto boy_face_0
        }
        "Thin Chiseled" {
        tony changes face into Chiseled Oval
        goto boy_face_0
        }
        "Stubble" {
        tony changes face into Chiseled Square
        goto boy_face_0
        }
        "Defined Triangle" {
        tony changes face into Defined Triangle
        goto boy_face_0
        }
        "Square Jaw" {
        tony changes face into Square Jaw
        goto boy_face_0
        }
        <GREEN>"Looks good!"{
        goto boy_change_0
        }

        label boy_eyes_0
        tony starts idle
        NARRATOR
        What do your eyes look like?
        choice
        "Sweet" {
        tony changes eyes into Sloping Innocent
        goto boy_eyes_0
        }
        "Sarcastic" {
        tony changes eyes into Stoic Almond
        goto boy_eyes_0
        }
        "Round" {
        tony changes eyes into Classic Round
        goto boy_eyes_0
        }
        "Narrow" {
        tony changes eyes into Sloping Smolder
        goto boy_eyes_0
        }
        "Gentle" {
        tony changes eyes into Narrow Gentle
        goto boy_eyes_0
        }
        <GREEN>"Select a color."{
        goto boy_eyesColor_0
        }

        label boy_eyesColor_0
        tony starts idle
        NARRATOR
        What color are your eyes?
        choice
        "Blue" {
        tony changes eyesColor into Blue
        }
        "Brown" {
        tony changes eyesColor into Brown
        }
        "Black" {
        tony changes eyesColor into Black
        }
        "Green" {
        tony changes eyesColor into Green
        }
        <GREEN>"Looks good!"{
        goto boy_change_0
        }
        goto boy_eyesColor_0
        label boy_mouth_0
        tony starts idle
        NARRATOR
        What mouth shape do you have?
        choice
        "Classic" {
        tony changes mouth into Classic
        tony starts shush
        goto boy_mouth_0
        }"Full" {
        tony changes mouth into Full Round
        tony starts shush
        goto boy_mouth_0
        }"Small" {
        tony changes mouth into Small Round
        tony starts shush
        goto boy_mouth_0
        }"Smirk" {
        tony changes mouth into Smirk
        tony starts shush
        goto boy_mouth_0
        }"Uneven" {
        tony changes mouth into Uneven
        tony starts shush
        goto boy_mouth_0
        }<GREEN>"Select color."{
        goto boy_mouthColor_0
        }
        label boy_mouthColor_0
        NARRATOR
        What color lips would you like?
        choice
        "Blush" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Blush
        goto boy_mouthColor_0
        }"Champagne" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Champagne
        goto boy_mouthColor_0
        }"Olive" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Olive
        goto boy_mouthColor_0
        }"Toffee" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Toffee
        goto boy_mouthColor_0
        }"Taupe"{
        tony changes mouthColor into Taupe
        goto boy_mouthColor_0
        }<PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto boy_change_0
        }<GREEN>"Change lip shape."{
        goto boy_mouth_0
        }<GREEN>"Next Page"{
        goto boy_mouthColor_1
        }
        label boy_mouthColor_1
        NARRATOR
        What color lips would you like?
        choice
        "Mocha" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Mocha
        goto boy_mouthColor_1
        }"Rosewood" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Rosewood
        goto boy_mouthColor_1
        }"Dark" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Dark
        goto boy_mouthColor_1
        }"Chestnut" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Chestnut
        goto boy_mouthColor_1
        }"Sable"{
        tony changes mouthColor into Sable
        goto boy_mouthColor_1
        }<PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto boy_change_0
        }<GREEN>"Change lip shape."{
        goto boy_mouth_0
        }<GREEN>"Next Page"{
        goto boy_mouthColor_2
        }
        label boy_mouthColor_2
        NARRATOR
        What color lips would you like?
        choice
        "Bubblegum Pink" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Bubblegum Pink
        goto boy_mouthColor_2
        }"Orange Crush" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Orange Crush
        goto boy_mouthColor_2
        }"Rose"{
        tony changes mouthColor into Rose
        goto boy_mouthColor_2
        }"Raspberry"{
        tony changes mouthColor into Raspberry
        goto boy_mouthColor_2
        }"Cherry Red"{
        tony changes mouthColor into Cherry Red
        goto boy_mouthColor_2
        }
        <PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto boy_change_0
        }<GREEN>"Change lip shape."{
        goto boy_mouth_0
        }<GREEN>"Next Page"{
        goto boy_mouthColor_3
        }
        label boy_mouthColor_3
        NARRATOR
        What color lips would you like?
        choice
        "Dusty Rose"{
        tony changes mouthColor into Dusty Rose
        goto boy_mouthColor_3
        }"Bordeaux" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Bordeaux
        goto boy_mouthColor_3
        }"Wine" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Wine
        goto boy_mouthColor_3
        }"Scarlet" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Scarlet
        goto boy_mouthColor_3
        }"Plum" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Plum
        goto boy_mouthColor_3
        }<PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto boy_change_0
        }<GREEN>"Change lip shape."{
        goto boy_mouth_0
        }<GREEN>"Next Page"{
        goto boy_mouthColor_4
        }
        label boy_mouthColor_4
        NARRATOR
        What lip color would you like?
        choice
        "Lavender"{
        tony changes mouthColor into Lavender
        goto boy_mouthColor_4
        }"Sea Foam" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Seafoam
        goto boy_mouthColor_4
        }"Sky Blue" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Sky Blue
        goto boy_mouthColor_4
        }"Emerald" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Emerald
        goto boy_mouthColor_4
        }"Azure" {
        tony changes mouthColor into Azure
        goto boy_mouthColor_4
        }<PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto boy_change_0
        }<GREEN>"Change lip shape."{
        goto boy_mouth_0
        }<GREEN>"Next Page"{
        goto boy_mouthColor_0
        }

        label boy_hair_0
        NARRATOR
        Which hair style would you like?
        choice
        "Cropped" {
        tony changes hair into Short Cropped Hair
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_0
        }"Buzzed" {
        tony changes hair into Buzzed Hair
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_0
        }"Slicked Back" {
        tony changes hair into Slicked Back Hair
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_0
        }"Pompadour" {
        tony changes hair into Modern Pompadour
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_0
        }"Cornrow Bun" {
        tony changes hair into Cornrow Bun
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_0
        }
        <PREMIUM>"This looks good!"{
        goto boy_change_0
        }<GREEN>"Change Color."{
        goto boy_hairColor_0
        }<GREEN>"More Styles."{
        goto boy_hair_1
        }
        label boy_hair_1
        NARRATOR
        Which hair style would you like?
        choice
        "Spiked" {
        tony changes hair into Spiked Up Hair
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_1
        }"Shaved Sides" {
        tony changes hair into Shaved Sides
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_1
        }"Emo" {
        tony changes hair into Emo Boy Hair
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_1
        }"Messy Faux Hawk" {
        tony changes hair into Unstyled Faux Hawk
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_1
        }"Long Braids" {
        tony changes hair into Long Braids
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_1
        }
        <PREMIUM>"This looks good!"{
        goto boy_change_0
        }<GREEN>"Change Color."{
        goto boy_hairColor_0
        }<GREEN>"More Styles."{
        goto boy_hair_2
        }
        label boy_hair_2
        NARRATOR
        Which hair style would you like?
        choice
        "Flip" {
        tony changes hair into SoCal Flip
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_2
        }"Manbun" {
        tony changes hair into Boy Bun
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_2
        }"Wave" {
        tony changes hair into Short Wave
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_2
        }"Faux Hawk" {
        tony changes hair into Male Subtle Faux Hawk
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_2
        }"Natural Curls" {
        tony changes hair into Natural Curls
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_2
        }
        <PREMIUM>"This looks good!"{
        goto boy_change_0
        }<GREEN>"Change Color."{
        goto boy_hairColor_0
        }<GREEN>"More Styles."{
        goto boy_hair_3
        }

        label boy_hair_3
        NARRATOR
        Which hair style would you like?
        choice
        "Shoulder Length" {
        tony changes hair into Shoulder Length
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_3
        }"Wild Curly" {
        tony changes hair into Wild Curly Hair
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_3
        }"Long Dreads" {
        tony changes hair into Long Dreadlocks
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_3
        }"Twist" {
        tony changes hair into Twist Hair Male
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_3
        }"Long Bangs" {
        tony changes hair into Long Bangs
        tony starts idle_head_bob
        goto boy_hair_3
        }
        <PREMIUM>"This looks good!"{
        goto boy_change_0
        }<GREEN>"Change Color."{
        goto boy_hairColor_0
        }<GREEN>"More Styles."{
        goto boy_hair_0
        }

        label boy_hairColor_0
        NARRATOR
        What hair color would you like?
        choice
        "Auburn" {
        tony changes hairColor into Auburn
        goto boy_hairColor_0
        }"Black" {
        tony changes hairColor into Charcoal
        goto boy_hairColor_0
        }"Blond" {
        tony changes hairColor into Blond
        goto boy_hairColor_0
        }"Chestnut"{
        tony changes hairColor into Chestnut
        goto boy_hairColor_0
        }"Fawn" {
        tony changes hairColor into Fawn
        goto boy_hairColor_0
        }<PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto boy_change_0
        }<GREEN>"Change Style."{
        goto boy_hair_0
        }<GREEN>"More Colors"{
        goto boy_hairColor_1
        }

        label boy_hairColor_1
        NARRATOR
        What hair color would you like?
        choice
        "Mint" {
        tony changes hairColor into Mint
        goto boy_hairColor_1
        }"Blue" {
        tony changes hairColor into Blasting Blue
        goto boy_hairColor_1
        }"Pink" {
        tony changes hairColor into Pop Pink
        goto boy_hairColor_1
        }"Grey"{
        tony changes hairColor into Grey
        goto boy_hairColor_1
        }"Purple" {
        tony changes hairColor into Punky Purple
        goto boy_hairColor_1
        }<PREMIUM>"Looks good!"{
        goto boy_change_0
        }<GREEN>"Change Style."{
        goto boy_hair_0
        }<GREEN>"More Colors"{
        goto boy_hairColor_0
        }

        label boy_nose_0
        @zoom reset
        NARRATOR
        What does your nose look like?
        choice
        "Small" {
        tony changes nose into Button
        tony starts idle
        }
        "Refined" {
        tony changes nose into Refined
        tony starts idle
        }
        "Roman" {
        tony changes nose into Roman
        tony starts idle
        }
        "Wide" {
        tony changes nose into Wide
        tony starts idle
        }"Upturned"{
        tony changes nose into Upturned
        tony starts idle
        }<GREEN>"Looks great!"{
        goto boy_change_0
        }
        goto boy_nose_0
        label boy_avatar_end
        @zoom reset
        &TONY exits right
        #}

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        • Apes
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          Just ignore them. You can still publish a story with them. It's because some of the words are written together.
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