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    Once More, With Feeling

    Description: Ava was the most popular girl at school, now she's an outcast. Help her climb the social ladder and even find love!

    Summary: Ava used to be one of the most popular girls at her high school, but after an embarrassing incident, she finds herself at the bottom of the social ladder. It's nearing the end of the worst year of Ava's life, and she is desperate to raise her social status before summer vacation rolls around. Will Ava ever regain her popularity? Or will she find something much more along the way? Help Ava navigate the hectic, drama-filled hallways of high school, forge new friendships, and even find love!

    Featuring:
    • New Spotlight format
    • Choices that actually impact the story
    • Three love interests, with the possibility of F/F romance
    I'm still figuring out Episode's choice/branch mechanics, so fingers crossed on whether or not I'll really be able to make it so you can choose between three love interests (featured on the cover I've uploaded below). This is kind of an ambitious first project, but I've written visual novels before so I'm hoping it'll turn out well?

    Anyway, do let me know what you think! Is the story interesting? Boring? Would you be interested in reading it?

    EDIT: If you'd like to help me finalize a major plot point for this story, please vote on this poll and/or reply with your thoughts here: http://forums.episodeinteractive.com...y-future-story
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    Last edited by Joyous; 11-27-2017, 12:23 PM.

  • #2
    I would actually read this. Do you have the link for your story?

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    • Joyous
      Joyous commented
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      Thank you for your response! I'm so glad you're intrigued by the premise. At the moment, though, this is a work in progress. Also the Spotlight story style is still being tweaked, so I was thinking on holding off on publishing for a while!

    • GraceLagos
      GraceLagos commented
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      Is the spotlight option back? Cuz I want to write my story in spotlight but it doesn’t show I can use it

  • #3
    This sounds really interesting! Let me know when this is released cause I will for sure read it.

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    • Joyous
      Joyous commented
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      Ah, thanks so much for your interest! I'm working on the outline, as well as fleshing out the characters, at the moment. Here's hoping that things go smoothly, and Spotlight comes back!

  • #4
    I'm working on the outline right now, and unfortunately, I've hit a bit of a snag. If you'd like to help me decide a major plot point for this story, vote in the poll and/or shoot me a response here: http://forums.episodeinteractive.com...y-future-story

    Thanks!

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    • Veronica
      Veronica commented
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      Just make sure that there aren't any plotholes about Ava's embarassing incident

  • #5
    Story Title: Niklaus grand children
    Story Author:jazmend esparza
    Story Genre: drama
    Story Summary: What happen when NOBODY understand you? Reject form everyone? Do you find a way to be happy with yourself? Or not?
    Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6153081077366784
    number of charters: 9 working on 10

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    • #6
      Story Title: Niklaus grand children
      Story Author:jazmend esparza
      Story Genre: drama
      Story Summary: What happen when NOBODY understand you? Reject form everyone? Do you find a way to be happy with yourself? Or not?
      Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6153081077366784
      number of charters: 9 working on 10

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      • allyy20
        allyy20 commented
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        If you want someone to read your story, I think you should be looking for that thread. This thread is for Joyous' story, and not yours.

      • Veronica
        Veronica commented
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        I argee with allyy20

    • #7
      sorry wasnt read all of them my bad

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