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  • ♥ Story Reviews ♥

    Hey everyone!! I have nothing going on today so I thought I'd review some stories! I love discovering new stories/authors so I really enjoy doing this! I've done reviews before and I tend to make them pretty long and thorough, if that's what you want.

    ♥♥If you want a review, just comment the name, author, genre and a summary of your story! ♥♥

    (gif bc I idk wanted this thread to look pretty)

    I'll read 2-4 chapters of your story (depending on how long the chapters are) and have a list of my critiques for each chapter. I usually just write down/type things that I like/dislike/etc. as I read it. Things on this list could be about plot, characters, directing or some random line I thought was funny lol. Then, I'll do a big summary about everything combined. I will make some suggestions on how I think the story can be improved, from a reader's standpoint. I'll message you the review when I'm finished. Remember, this is your story and you have no reason to change it if you like it just the way it is. ♥♥

    Super excited to read your stories!

    Reviews are
    CLOSED right now! If this says closed, please don't post on here! I have to finish up the ones I have!
    Please note that if I have multiple people that have requested, it may take a little while for me to finish your review. Please be patient!
    Last edited by MateaH; 11-12-2017, 10:22 AM.

  • #2
    Hello, I'd like some feedback on my new story.

    Title: The BodyGuard
    Author: Amii Fayy
    Genre: Drama
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4915780091248640
    Summary: The worlds of Cambridge 3 most powerful families collide. What happens when their children starts falling in love?

    I don't care if you post it here or in my PM. I appreciated the feedback because I'm seeking ways to improve and take the story. Thanks in advance.

    Comment


    • MateaH
      MateaH commented
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      I'm starting now! I'll message you when I'm finished!

    • aicened
      aicened commented
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      Thank you

  • #3
    Hi Matea! Thanks for checking out my story. Really looking forward to your feedback!

    Title: The Night Of
    Author: DR
    Episodes: 5 (Complete)
    Genre: Drama/Romance
    Summary: Anna moves to the big city. But her first night doesn't go quite as planned when she learns her roommate's dark secret.
    http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6017654277144576

    Follow me on Instagram @ DR_Episode

    Comment


    • MateaH
      MateaH commented
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      Hey! I'm starting now and I'll message you when I'm done!

  • #4
    Hey! Thanks for doing this Adding my story to the list you've got going on. Hope you enjoy it!

    Title: The Royal Seamstress
    Genre: Drama/comedy/romance
    link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5191049711190016
    Chapters: 6 (Ongoing)
    Summary: Bryndesia pushes the boundaries of fashion in a conservative kingdom to save her friends shop. What will be the reaction of the kingdom??

    Comment


    • MateaH
      MateaH commented
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      Hi!! I'm starting your review now and I'll message you when I'm finished!

  • #5
    Here’s my story:

    Title: Projection!
    Genre: Comedy
    # Of Episodes: 5 (ongoing)
    Style: Limelight
    Description: Harry Stevens is looking for his big break in the world of musical theatre. But what will it take to get there?
    Instagram: kartis.episode
    Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6046875219918848

    Comment


    • MateaH
      MateaH commented
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      Hey! I'm beginning the review now! I'll message you when I'm done!

  • #6
    Title: Bad Boys
    Author: Melia00
    Genre: Drama/Romance
    Episodes: 5
    Summary: What will Bella do when she crosses the path not with only one, but two bad boys?! Drama awaits..
    link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4853121866137600

    Comment


    • MateaH
      MateaH commented
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      Hey! I have to wait for passes, but I'm doing the first chapter of your story right now and I'll message you when I'm done with the review!

    • Melia
      Melia commented
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      Okay. Np

  • #7
    This is my first story and I really like hearing feedback, hope you can check it out

    Title: Finding Ourselves Together
    Author: Kat Valentine
    Genre: Romance/Drama
    Chapters: 9 (ongoing)
    Style: Ink
    Description: See that girl, what's her name? Lia. She's changed a lot, not in a good way. What happened to her? Well...
    He happened.

    Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6269696848166912
    Instagram: @kats_episode

    Comment


    • MateaH
      MateaH commented
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      Hey! I'm starting now and I'll message you when I'm finished!

  • #8
    Title: Killjoy
    Author: Lexi Lu
    Genre: Drama/Romance
    Chapters: 5 ongoing
    Style: Ink
    Description: Aubrey is your average girl- well almost. Now she's stumbling into the world of parties, boys, and trouble.
    Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5513115953004544

    Comment


    • MateaH
      MateaH commented
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      Hey! I'm starting your review now. I'll message you when I'm done!

  • #9
    Title: The Past Shapes Us
    Author: Solete
    Description: Samuel is a young detective working on a series of murders while trying to find himself, will he follow the right path or will his dark past stop him.
    Genre: Mystery/Crime
    Style: Ink
    Chapters: 10 (ongoing)

    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4735516289007616

    Comment


    • MateaH
      MateaH commented
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      Hey! I'm starting your review and I'll message you soon!

  • #10
    I'd love if you could read/review my story. Here are the details:

    Story: Both of Us
    Author: Zoe K.
    Style: Ink
    Episodes: 10 (ongoing)
    Genre: Drama/Romance
    Description: Marie wanted the truth, but she wasn't prepared to unearth her family's dangerous secrets... or to find love.
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6732271222784000

    ​​​​​​​Thanks!

    Comment


    • MateaH
      MateaH commented
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      Hey! I'm starting your review and I'll message you when I'm done!

  • #11
    Hey Matea! I'd appreciate it if you read my story and told me your honest opinion.

    Story: See the Real Me
    Author: Arina Herman
    Episodes: 5 (ongoing)
    Genre: Romance
    Description: Alex is fine with her uneventful life. That is, until a new student comes to her school. His name is Ed and he's blind.
    Link: http://bit.ly/2yYdKoM

    Thank you in advance!

    Comment


    • MateaH
      MateaH commented
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      Hey! I'm starting now and I'll message you when I'm done!

  • #12
    Heyy! It would be really cool if you could read my story! I want your honest opinion though so I can fix the things that aren’t pleasing for the reader.

    story: Archaeologist: Lost Temple
    author: Clarissa Alexander
    episodes: 3 (ongoing)
    genre: Adventure
    style:ink
    description: Mission:Find the lost temple to save your grandmother’s life. Problem: You don’t know if you’re trusting the right person.
    link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5049555919568896

    Comment


    • MateaH
      MateaH commented
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      Hey! I'm starting now and I'll message you with the review soon!

  • #13
    Here's mine! Hope you will like it
    Title: The Darkness Within (Limelight)
    Author: Zayen
    Description: Tragedy descends the day your ability emerges. Will possessing such ability prove to be a blessing or a curse?
    Genre: Fantasy/Mystery/Thriller
    Episodes: 6 (ongoing)
    Style: Limelight
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5805209858867200

    Comment


    • MateaH
      MateaH commented
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      Hey, sorry for the delay! I'm starting your review now!

  • #14

    Hii , I'm a new writter on the episode app, and I need some feedback and advice ...

    It's hard enough for someone new to promote your story and I need help in that regard.


    Title: Death The Girl
    Author: Catthegirl
    Description: You have been trained all your life to avenge the death of your parents. But will you fall in love with the enemy?
    Genre: Drama/Romance
    Style: Ink
    CHAPTERS: Five (ongoing)
    LINK: episodeinteractive.com/s/5063136836190208
    Instagram: catthegirl.episode

    Thank u

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