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  • Looking For Feedback On My First Story

    Title: Fanatical
    Author: Sarah Ashley
    Genre: Ink
    Episodes:3 (ongoing)
    Description: Camilla's obsession with finding her missing twin will take her on a dangerous path she just might not be prepared for.
    http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4919617463123968


    Please leave feedback thank you so much.

    Last edited by saraluvsepisode; 11-27-2017, 12:14 PM.

  • #2
    saraluvsepisode Hi! I’d love to read your story. Ang here’s mine. I just published the latest episode of Demon God. You’re always welcomed here to read my story!

    [DEMON GOD]
    She is a girl who lives a normal life. But what she doesn't know is that her fate has ordained they should meet one day. As the only human in Devildom, his love is all that she has. But will his dark secrets change everything? "You never know, he's the God to this world."


    Please write to me if you like it!
    Read on http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4678673313693696

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    • Castino
      Castino commented
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      saraluvsepisode So am I! Lol. And thanks very much! How do you like it, may I ask? By the way, I’ve read all the 3 episodes of your story. And I have some screenshots of them. Would you like to see? 😜 I must say, her mother is so beautiful!

    • saraluvsepisode
      saraluvsepisode commented
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      Hi and thanks for reading my story. How did you like it? I have read all 5 of the episodes you put out and have sent you a screenshot. I really like your story it has some mystery to it. I will continue to read as I do want to find out what will happen.

    • Castino
      Castino commented
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      Hi saraluvsepisode ! I’ve sent you my screenshots just now. I cut them a little so that not to exceed the bytes limit. My opinions are as follows:
      First of all, you really did a good job! I like your wonderful backgrounds and excellent choices script-writing skill, which I did terribly in mine, lol.
      Second, I noticed that at the beginning of chapter 2, there was a pice of narration “To be continued...”. I believe you left it there by accident.
      And third, it’s about the zoom setting. I found several scenes the characters didn’t been shown properly. Please at least make sure they have complete faces while talking...😂

      That’s all I thought by far. And again, thanks for reading!😘

  • #3
    I am going to read your story right now.

    Here is mine... it would be nice if you read it

    Title: Star Power: The Haunted Act
    Author: Iman
    Genre: Horror
    Number of Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
    Style: Ink
    Description: You're a singer making a new turn by doing a horror movie with your friends. But, it all soon turns into reality.
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6464859630469120

    THANK YOU FOR READING!

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    • saraluvsepisode
      saraluvsepisode commented
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      Yes I sure will read it. Please leave feedback on my story when you are able. Thanks for reading.

    • saraluvsepisode
      saraluvsepisode commented
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      I have completed reading your story and have sent you screenshots. Thank you for reading my story and please leave feedback.

  • #4
    Heya, I'm starting your story now
    I will PM you when I have finished. I would really appreciate it if you could check out mine as well thanks!

    Title: Lana's love
    Author: kittyKoala
    Style: Classic
    Chapters: 11 (Ongoing)
    Description: Lana is beautiful but her insecurities rule her life. Can one person change that; even with the secrets he's forced to keep?
    Genre: Romance fantasy.
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6072010427072512

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    • saraluvsepisode
      saraluvsepisode commented
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      Great will send screenshots when through reading . Look interesting 😊

    • saraluvsepisode
      saraluvsepisode commented
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      Hello again. I have read your story and sent you a PM.

  • #5
    Hey !This is my new story for the Star Power Category!!
    My name is Jenny MM, and I believe that this story needs to be shared!

    The story name is Star Power: Above and Beyond
    Style: LimeLight
    Genre: Drama

    http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5187034242220032

    This story focuses on female empowerment in Hollywood!

    The Description:
    Jamie's a famous actress who's determined to change how Hollywood is run. Will she be able to climb her way to the top?

    If any of you have tips and tricks to give me, I would greatly appreciate your support! Please keep reading my story!
    More longer and frequent episodes to come!

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    • saraluvsepisode
      saraluvsepisode commented
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      Hello I have read your story and sent you a PM.

  • #6
    Great I will read and send screenshots when through. It looks interesting 😊

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    • #7

      Want to do a read for read???

      Title: Star Power


      Author: G. Lambent
      Insta: g.lambent_episode


      Genre: Romance

      Episodes: 3 and completed

      Style: INK

      Description:
      Fame. Fortune. Money. Power. Is it worth the loss of the one you love the most? *CC* (3 Endings)

      Link:

      http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4781556385316864

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      • saraluvsepisode
        saraluvsepisode commented
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        Sure will I am about to read yours and will PM with screenshots. Good luck on the contest and please leave fan mail with feedback.

      • saraluvsepisode
        saraluvsepisode commented
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        I have read your story and sent you a PM.

    • #8
      Hey, guys. I just published my very first story. Could you please read my story?.?

      Title: Where do we go from here?
      Author: Lawful Evil
      Genre: fantasy
      Episodes: 4 ongoing
      Description: Have you ever heard about a miracle? No? Let the story show you the world of magic, spells and poisons.
      Style: INK
      Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6330841475842048

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      • saraluvsepisode
        saraluvsepisode commented
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        Hello I have read your story and sent screenshots and a message through PM.

      • lawful evil
        lawful evil commented
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        saraluvsepisode thank you. Tell me what's your story. I'll read it this weekednd)))

      • saraluvsepisode
        saraluvsepisode commented
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        Your welcome and my story is Fanatical. This is actually my post Looking For Feedback On My New Story so all the story info is up top. Hope you like it (:
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