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  • Upcoming VR story. Read my story and I will read yours too.

    Warning, I do not recommend skipping scenes otherwise it would mess up the zooming of the episodes. It is still a work in progress.

    Title: Netoons (Virtual Reality)
    Genre: Sci-Fi, Romance 1/2, Action
    Episodes Completed: 1,2, 3 (Halfway done.)

    The episode lengths are about 2000+ lines of code.

    thank you and please enjoy.

  • #2
    Hi there!

    First of all I think this is a very nice idea of you!

    Second, I'd like to share my first (and only) story with you. I've not been able to write or work on it for a few months now because I had personal life events going on...
    Since writing is my passion, I decided to start revamping the 5 episodes the story has at this point. (It really helps to check every episode again after months, I'm very critic so I saw 100 things that could've been better. (Maybe that's why it takes me so long to just revamp 1 episode...)
    So I really know there'll be little errors (grammatical (I'm from Belgium) and the directing)...

    As soon as I'm able to republish episode 1-5, I'll also release episode 6 and a brand new story cover (see attachment and don't expect too much...).
    It would be nice if you'd take the time to read my story, when you're ready with the other ones on your list, of course.

    Forums Username: Alphan
    Story Title: Upside Down
    Author Name: Alphan
    Genre: Romance, mystery, drama
    Story Style: INK story
    Short Summary: "June escaped her previous life. Will she meet people who will love her or will her old enemies destroy her again?"
    Number of Published Episodes: 5 (ongoing)

    Please, take your time and let me know if you liked it! (For read for read/review for review contact me on Instagram please!)

    And I'll hand you my instagram (alphan.episode) in case you've something else to say, I react faster there because I never use the forums site on my phone...

    Enjoy your day,


    • Hisoka
      Hisoka commented
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      OK I have just read your story. I must admit it sure gaved me quite the dejavu :3

      Good start with peer pressure and transferring into a new school.
      Interesting drama with the main protagonist June and her love interest Spencer I guess...
      Then we have more high school drama going on especially between June and Cleo.

      Keep up the good work.

  • #3
    Hey there, I'm interested in doing a read for read! Do let me know if you're interested and I'll pm you screenshots as proof once I'm done
    Here are my stories:

    Title: The Darkness Within (Limelight)
    Author: Zayen
    Description: Tragedy descends the day your ability emerges. Will possessing such ability prove to be a blessing or a curse?
    Genre: Fantasy/Mystery/Thriller
    Episodes: 7 (ongoing)
    Style: Limelight

    Title: Necessary Evil *REVAMPED*
    Author: Zayen
    Description: Over ten years, you've checked in and out of a mental asylum because of the demons you see. What if they were real? (CC)
    Genre: Horror
    Episodes: 9 (ongoing)
    Style: Ink

    You may choose any one of the two stories to read


    • Hisoka
      Hisoka commented
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      Yeah the elemental power or magic concept was very interesting to see. The electricity power is SICK! Then we also got the telekinesis powers by the main protagonist.

    • lils_ep
      lils_ep commented
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      Hey! Zayen, the first chapter of your story was incredible! The overlays were GREAT! I will try to finish reading, but of course everyone's gotta wait for those passes haha. Keep writing, you have talent! <3

    • Zayen
      Zayen commented
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      lils_ep Thank you so much for reading! I will definitely keep writing

  • #4

    Hiiii! I am an avid user of mobile VR and am pretty excited to see a story with some sort of VR related material in it. Too much excite!


    • Hisoka
      Hisoka commented
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      Haha, well my story is about characters experiencing the Virtual Reality world. I am still currently editing my story until I'm fully satisfied with it.
      Hope you are able to check it out.

  • #5
    Hi everyone please read and share my story!!! I will give yours a try too! it's about a abusive relationship and awareness about abuse!

    Title: Tough Love
    Author: Lana-Ashley
    Genre: Drama
    Number of episodes: 3 (ongoing)
    Style: Ink
    Description: He hurts me, he'll shout and hit and punch and scream..but he says it's just tough love.



    • Hisoka
      Hisoka commented
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      I must admit your episode was quite girly.
      But great work with the animations and zooming.
      Great work with spot directing.

      I liked how the 2 best friends are together and fall in love with those 2 random FBs down the street.

      Great episode.
      You have quite the talent.

  • #6
    Hello! I don't know if you are still doing this, but if so, here is my story! My co-writers and I work together to make fun, entertaining stories!

    Title: Kidnapping Chaos
    Author: The Watanabe Squad (we are a trio!)
    Genre: Drama *very dramatic!*
    Number of episodes: 9 (ongoing)
    Style: Ink
    Description: Three girls are kidnapped. You can't trust anyone. You make decisions for ALL of them. Will you survive?

    Thanks, I am currently trying to find your episode story, but I can't find it. Do you have any search keywords I can use to search it? I entered your link in Safari, but it wasn't redirecting me to episode and showed an error. I will keep trying, though!

    -Liliana from the Watanabe Squad


    • #7
      Title: A Love Worth Fighting For
      Author: K.O_episode
      Instagram: k.o_episodes
      Style: Ink
      Episodes out: 3 (working on 4)
      Description: Aubreys childhood best friend, Logan, leaves to join the army. But before he deploys Aubrey expresses her true feelings towards him. He had made her a promise that he would write and call her as much as he could, but life always gets in the way. Will their love be worth fighting for? Or Will they walk away from one another?

      Attached Files


      • #8
        Hey I’ll do a read for read with you.
        I’ll pm you when I’m done With yours.
        Here is my story.

        Title: A Juggling Game

        Genre: Romance

        Style: INK

        Episodes: 8

        Small description: Kara is a senior in college, intern for the top stylist in the world, and maintains her relationships and friendships. After a while though something is going to fall by the wayside. Can she juggle everything and stay on top or is she going to fall and crumble?

        Here's my Instagram for updates:
        IG: KandieCane6703

        Link to my story