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    If you need a story review comment below four simple things:
    - Story name (ex."When in Cali: Season 1)
    - Story author (ex. Brooke)
    - Story genre (ex. Romance)
    - # of episodes

    If anybody needs help on their story reach me by my Instagram @episodebrooke17 (I can help with commands and covers!)
    I typically respond fairly quick to review request! If you do not receive a response I usually haven't seen your comment or your comment is missing key information!


    I'll respond with these three simple things:
    -Rating (out of seven)
    -Suggestions
    -Errors (Grammar, commands, etc.)
    Rating chart
    1- Incorrect use of many things
    2- Incorrect use of directing commands
    3- Incorrect grammar
    4- Okay grammar and use of commands. Contains decent plot.
    5- Few mistakes and good plot
    6- Good covers, grammar, directing, and conflict
    7- Outstanding covers, grammar, directing, and conflict
    Last edited by Brookes__; 01-08-2018, 06:25 PM.

  • #2
    I'd really love to hear your opinion (and suggestions how to improve as well 😁)
    Title: INDEPENDENT
    Author: Sophie K.
    No. of Episode: 8 (ongoing)
    Style: Ink
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6305849864749056
    IG: episode.sophiek

    Story Description: Elena has always dreamed about moving in with her best friend and start living on her own. Now she got the chance to..

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    • Brookes__
      Brookes__ commented
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      I would rate this 5 / 7 due to grammar mistakes but for English not being your first language it was impressive (6/7)! I would suggest using more zooms and if you need help learning the zoom command better I would be glad to help just DM my Instagram (@episodebrooke17) . The only errors I found was with grammar but like you had explained it is not your first language, if you do need help with certain lines and your first language is German or Spanish I will gladly help! I also loved your cover!!

    • Sophie.K
      Sophie.K commented
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      Thank you so much 😍 and also thanks for offering your help. I've figured the zooms out already but there's still a lot to learn and I'm really grateful for your offer.

  • #3
    Hello,
    I am writing my first story and I would really appreciate if you could also give me a feedback on it. Thanks in advance. =)
    - Story name: RUBY and the secrets
    - Story author: I. Gunver
    - Story genre: Mystery, Romance
    - # of episodes: 11 (more to come)

    A girl with a mysterious family and a complicated love life, has to face all of them at once. Will she be able to reveal the secrets?

    Link:
    http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5312744157085696

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    • igunver
      igunver commented
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      I started using the transition commands later in the story since it is my first but I get what you mean =) I usually get positive feedback on the dialogue and story telling but not everyone has to like it I guess. Thanks anyway.. =)

    • Brookes__
      Brookes__ commented
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      igunver I will look further into the story since I only read one episode

    • igunver
      igunver commented
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      Oh thank you! If you can think of anything to add like what I can do to make the character introductions more interesting or anything else I really would appreciate the advice. Thanks again =)

  • #4
    Hi! I'd like if you do the review for my story too. I'd love to hear your thoughts about it.
    Here's my story

    Title- The Five Elements
    Author- Purple
    Genre- Fantasy
    Number of episodes - 6 {and ongoing}

    Description - Enter the life of the five elements and help them save the human world from approaching danger. *Choices matter.*
    Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5655672267735040

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    • Brookes__
      Brookes__ commented
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      PurpleP Haha I loved the intro it looked like a movie intro! I would give this 7 / 7 due to the amazing zooms and directing skills. This was an amazing plot and an extremely original idea! (For being featured in other stories/character contests follow me on instagram @episodebrooke17)
      Last edited by Brookes__; 01-09-2018, 05:28 PM.

    • PurpleP
      PurpleP commented
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      Oh purple! Thanks a lottt for the perfect rating. I'm glad you enjoyed it...

  • #5
    Hi, I am a new writer and would like to know what score my story could reach.

    Title: DEMON GOD
    Author: E.Z.
    Genre: Fantasy
    Style: Ink
    Chapters: 7 (on going)
    Instagram: @e.z.episode
    Description: He starved himself for three hundred years in order to abide by a woman's promise. Everyone in Devildom is waiting for him to die.
    Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4678673313693696

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    • #6
      Title: Love Quest

      Author: Katie and Maddie

      Genre: Romance

      Style: Ink

      Episodes: 7 ongoing

      Description: After a tough breakup, you are on a quest to find love again. But, is being on a TV show a real way to find love?

      Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5416940223594496

      Instagram: @thetalk_maddie and @kt_episode

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      • Brookes__
        Brookes__ commented
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        lovelymaddie I believe I have already read some of this story. I would give this story a 6 / 7 . I really liked the plot because it isn't as common (Everyone is into writing about gang leaders right now lol.) I would recommend using more @pause for a beat commands and zoom more often. Overall nice job!
        Last edited by Brookes__; 01-09-2018, 05:28 PM.

      • lovelymaddie
        lovelymaddie commented
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        Brookes__ Oops. I sometimes forget when I post. Sorry. Thank you for reading my story.

    • #7
      Story Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6550557582557184
      Story Name : Despoina's Assignment
      Author Name : 404 (NOT FOUND)
      Genre : Mystery
      Style : Ink
      Episodes : 3 ongoing
      Story Description : 2 murders + 1 missing girl
      What can a waiter do?
      But then, why is her name in "Despoina's Assignment"?
      She wants some answer, but they want something else.
      So, let the games begin.
      Instagram: nf404.episode

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      • Brookes__
        Brookes__ commented
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        M!ss Tarana I would give this a 6 / 7. Due to English not being your first language if you ever need any help with English phrases I speak German and Spanish as well! Your directing skills are outstanding! Very nice work!
        Last edited by Brookes__; 01-09-2018, 05:29 PM.

      • M!ss Tarana
        M!ss Tarana commented
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        Thank you very much... <3 It means a lot. I think, I really need some help with English... >_<

    • #8
      Hi Brookes, I think I have seen you like a few of my posts on instagram so I would lovd to know your review of my story!

      Story name: Wild One!
      Story author: Kira
      genre: drame
      number of episodes: 3 so far

      I have made some updates to the directing recently, if you have already read it!

      Looking forward to hearing what you think!
      xxx

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      • Brookes__
        Brookes__ commented
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        Kira53 I saw the Instagram post with the floral dress joke and I just saw it while I was reading haha! I think this story is great I would give it a 6.5 / 7 due to the fact there isn't many zooms or any customized covers. If you need help with getting a customized cover DM me on Instagram (@episodebrooke17). Like I think I said in the last review I love Skyes attitude she reminds me of my sister!
        Last edited by Brookes__; 01-09-2018, 05:30 PM.

      • Kira53
        Kira53 commented
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        Thanks Brookes! That is an amazing score!
        I have a cover pending review still, it takes ages to get them approved!
        Your sister is pretty cool then πŸ˜‰

      • Kira53
        Kira53 commented
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        Thanks Brookes! That is an amazing score!
        I have a cover pending review still, it takes ages to get them approved!
        Your sister is pretty cool then πŸ˜‰

    • #9
      Style lime light cc
      Chapter 6 ongoing
      name... shameless
      Author.....me jk lime light storyANA
      What happens when you mix business and pleasure

      http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6209978671169536
      ​​​​​​​pls share

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      • Brookes__
        Brookes__ commented
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        GoddessANA I cannot find your story on the episode app

    • #10
      Heya! I'm MOONMOON and I would love to get my story reviewed! I have chosen the classic style because it's still my fav one. Anyways, I hope you like it and have a nice reading! (ΰΉ‘οΏ«ά«οΏ©)

      Story Name: PERDITIO
      Story Author: MOONMOON

      Story Gender: Fantasy
      Number of Episodes: 6 (and ongoing)

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      • #11
        Story: Dark and Light
        Author: vanessaa
        Genre: Romance (Often drama as well tbh)
        Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5802028531580928
        Description: Vanessa is your average college freshman living in LA, that is until she meets two twins that are polar opposites. Somehow, Vanessa falls for both brothers. Who will she end up with?
        Style: INK
        Number of Episodes: 3
        This is a story I wrote a few years back as a fanfic. At that time, I got 30 000 views and a lot of people liked it, but at this point my story is very boring (in my eyes) so any ideas to make it better would be great. Thanks!

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        • Brookes__
          Brookes__ commented
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          vvanessaa23 I would give this a 5.5/7 because from the parts I read there was no zooming or transitions. Your grammar was great though! Keep up the hard work!

      • #12
        Story: The Definition Of Happiness
        Author: Gisele Palmer
        Genre: Romance/Mystery
        Episodes: 4
        App Summary: β€œThey both have their own secrets that brings them trials, but there is one particular secret they're unaware of that brings them together.”
        Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4611634928287744

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        • #13
          Hi! Here are the details of my story:

          Story name: Hearts Reunited
          Story author: Akasha Seavue
          Story genre: Drama
          # of episodes: 3

          Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5170974459297792

          I'd love to hear your thoughts!
          Thank you!

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          • akasha
            akasha commented
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            Thank you so much!! I really appreciate it! What do you mean though, you read it before?

          • Brookes__
            Brookes__ commented
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            akasha I have read a few episodes prior to this review forum

          • akasha
            akasha commented
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            Brookes__ I was surprised because I was under the impression that only people I made read for reads with checked it out! But thank you again! I appreciate you reading my story!!

        • #14
          Hiya. This is my story and I would so appreciate if you would read it and give me feedback, when you have the time. Thank you so much.

          TITLE: Far Away
          DESCRIPTION: At 11,Lucy witnessed a dreadful murder and shes next. She is put into an abusive foster home. 5 years later her estranged aunt hides her in an island.
          What waits for her on this island?

          AUTHOR: Sinead O'Neill
          GENRE: Romance, action, thriller
          EPISODES: 9 (on-going)
          STYLE: Ink
          Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6639166342430720

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          • #15
            Hi, this is my first story and I only have 3 episodes so far but would really appreciate a review.

            http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5124413478535168

            Title: The Lawyer and Me
            Author : Cleo
            Genre: Romance


            Thank you

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