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Is this a good Summary for my Mystery Story

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  • Is this a good Summary for my Mystery Story

    Summary:
    Shadowfield is the perfect town with perfect people, but this perfect town must have one dark evil secret.

  • #2
    I don't really know if this works, because I don't know the story well enough. But here are some tries. LOL, sorry if any of them suck. By the way, try adding more strong language. When I say that, I don't mean like curse words, haha. I mean strong language, that really shows through to the story that makes the reader want to read it. Make it mysterious, so the reader is curious.
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    The town of Shadowfield is full of perfection, even the people. With this reputation, a dark secret changes everything.

    Shadowfield; the perfect utopian town. But not everything is perfect, as the town holds a dark unbelievable secret.

    Shadowfield was perfect, but as a dark mysterious secret slowly unravels, the perspective of this town is changed.

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    Sorry for these horrible tries. :/

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    • #3
      angelyrwrites I know it's so hard writing a good description when you can only put two whole sentences in the description....

      Can I Pm? I really want to talk about my story but I don't want everyone to know what it's about.

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      • angelyrwrites
        angelyrwrites commented
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        Of course, you can PM me! Also, yes, I know it may be difficult do to the limited characters, which I absolutely hate.

    • #4
      Instead, I think you should do this:

      Summary:
      Shadowfield is known as the perfect town with the perfect people, but every perfect town must have one, dark, evil secret.

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      • #5
        Originally posted by GiGi is Me View Post
        Instead, I think you should do this:

        Summary:
        Shadowfield is known as the perfect town with the perfect people, but every perfect town must have one, dark, evil secret.
        Thank you For the imput hun

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