There was a @pause for a beat between majority of the chats between characters.
You only used sound effects, no music.
I was really confused through our the episode.
Sincerely,
Kylie
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I used @ action which is why it seemed not so flowy, and I didn’t specifically say that I was going to use music. Nonetheless, I’m just interested on why you were confused so that I can improve my story.
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I didn’t really understand what was going on.
Title: Fantastical-The Mermaid
Author: Rahdia
Style: INK
Episodes: 6
Plot: A chef seeking new ways to improve his cooking accidentally falls into the forbidden waters of Gaya where he meets the guardian of the sea: A mermaid
LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6670380075057152
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I didn’t finish the episode yet but I had to say “So far so good.”
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Story Name: H & V: From Zero to Hero
Author Name: Dr.Smile
Genre: Comedy (for now)
Description: Jax is the disabled loser of Mediocreopolis High, but one odd day, his life is completely transformed by a–burrito?!
About the cover… It’s on my phone and I’m posting from my laptop, unless you really want to see it on here I’d appreciate not to have to upload it right now but don’t hesitate to ask for it if you really need it.
Thanks in advance.
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Mostly the beginning. I was really confused
Which part of the beginning? I just added a flashback scene to that part over the past week. It might have messed with the intro?
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PM me.
Hey, @KMepi! Thank you for creating this thread! I’d love a review on my story. Here are the details:
Title: Fantastical: Silhouettes
Author: aprilish
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Style: Ink
Blurb: Arion’s ready to risk it all to make her dreams come true. Leslie sees him every day, yet fails to recognize who he is. Watch them fall in love…without ever meeting each other.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6116658762874880
Cover:
My Instagram: @aprilish.episode
Thank you so much! Looking forward to hearing your feedback! 
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Story name : Choose?!!!
Author: @ya
Genra: adventure/Sci-Fi
Description:
You aren’t a superhero, nor have magical powers! Just a wrong wish of your’s , causes Fate of whole human race to be in your’s hands!!! Will you Succeed or face defeat?? (2 ends)
Hope you enjoy 
You’re story was absolutely amazing. The cliffhangers just make me go GURLLLLL
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I wasn’t able to find your story 
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Hi guys! So I just released my first ever story and it would mean so much to me if you guys would like to check it out!
Name: Epitome Of Destruction
Description: Deception, loss, and killing lead to the revival of the life she left behind. As she recoups her lost identity, will she fulfill her heart’s desires or go rogue along the way?
Genre: Drama
Story art style: Classic
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6517253628624896
Large Cover:
Small Cover: ![Epitome_Of_Destruction_posterImage_H1e9oJ0bnH|483x321]
(upload://gUz1y6KHCMBJizpAsgFNe1tknon.png)
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Heres the small cover: 
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I searched up the description I found it.
Hey, there wasn’t many but one was hugging 
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Oh okay! I think I know where that part is and I will fix it.
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Sorry, I forgot to add link , here is the link