A Bitter Prayer link

Hey everyone, I was hoping you guys can read my story A Bitter Prayer. If you do decide to read it and leave a fanmail or a nice comment I promise to give you guys a heads up at the end of the last chapter. Thank you!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5548838525992960
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What is it about?

My story A Bitter Prayer is about a girl that realizes that she isn’t who she was told to believe she is and ends up going on a chase with her best friend and a boy she starts to have feelings for to find out the truth so she can stop living in her own nightmare.
Hope you’ll read it and comment to tell me what you think I should improve on. Thank you