So I’ve been working on a little animation intro for a future project and would love to hear what you think of it.
Please bare in mind that this is a working progress and a lot still needs to be done.
I always wondered if you lot would read a story if it had an intro like this…
I personally feel that it’s a little long but would love to hear your ideas
yeah it is a bit long. like who are all the charaters they cant all be importent
I like it! But then it is a tad long
Yeah that’s what I thought too, think the main four should just be showcased
Thanks
Yeah I thought it was long too.
I like it! But I think it’s better if you let us know who the character is throughout the story, so we can figure it out ourselves 
That’s why there’s a short story spin off, to dive into their past 
Can you have them doing animations while being introduced? The idle thing is kind of annoying.
Yeah I will do later on, I just wanted to get the main coding in first as that takes ages. It’s still a working progress
I feel like the intro is too long and introducing every character is kind of unnecessary imo. Better to let the reader meet the characters throughout the story 
It’s a sequel you already met the characters 
So yeah, just wondering if you have ideas on improvement, I mean if course make it shorter and have the guys animating something rather then being idle but I do wanna make a some sort of Intro to it but at the same time not put people off…
Honestly, I would suggest starting off with the story and when an important character enters (like one of those characters) you can have their name pop up? Something like that. I just don’t like the idea of an intro this long. If it’s a sequel then maybe you don’t need to introduce them at all?
True, what I was just thinking maybe a few looping scenes, the important characters then the title…
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