So I’ve heard your feedback and I’ve shortened it completely. You guys like short intros so here is the updated version.
Let me know what you think?
when yr character walk in, make sure that they are doing an animation, dont leave them standing there.
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Animations got it! Was thinking I wanted to to look like the cover though but I can give it a go
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Looks good to me but I agree perhaps add some animation to the characters. Not sure if you have read One of the girls by @amberose
Her chapters have a little intro to them like as if you were watching an episode that’s a part of a series.
I’d take a look at it, it’s really good 
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I’ll check it out thanks
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