Lmao yes
Bump!
A mafia story isn’t a mafia story without…the mafia.
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This got me though !!
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Oof. Trueee
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A mafia story isn’t a mafia story without… the words hot mafia-leader and innocent MC in the description
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A mafia story isn’t a mafia story without sultry words like “hot” and “steamy” and “bad” being written IN ALL CAPS.
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you forgot sexy 
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A mafia story isn’t a mafia story without someone being kidnapped
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LMAO lol.
And the word abs.
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… A scene where the MC joins the LI for a hot, steamy bath and an art scene pops up with the narration bubbles go crazy mentioning every fibre of muscle on the guy’s abs (when we literally have the art to show us how he looks like bruh)
Oh, they’d probably kiss, have s*x and then sleep until it’s morning…
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“His abs vibrated to the thrum of the hot tub, awake, alive, pulsating.”
And the art scene feels weird because it’s full CC and your protagonists look nothing like the image that probably took 20 hours or so to complete.
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I can not imagine someone having a steamy moment with a literal corpse. So “alive”, “pulsating” just sounds like a “no sh*t sherlock” statement…
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It’s supposed to sound smut-like and melodramatic because art scenes.
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Lmao. It always sounds cringey tho.
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A mafia story isn’t a mafia story without LI kissing MC without her consent
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bump so this doesn’t get closed x
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me writing a mafia story taking notes
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