A opening scene for my new story

Hello Guys, I have wrote a story and its completely finished, Its called Mum knows best, Am currently writting the spin off to it called Dad knows best
In my first story I have a cracker of a opening in each chapter.
However I dont know what to do for this one…
Its about a girl and her mum gets murdered when she is like 12ish years old, the person who kills the mum in front of her wanted to steal the girl to for trafficing.
The dad then resents the child for it, He becomes bitter and twisted and couldnt care about what happens to his daughter. She is abused all different ways by the fathers friends, and phyiscally and emotional abused by the dad.

Any ideas? I need it to be really dramatic.

Any ideas would help :slight_smile:

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