A picky but fair reviewer is opened for requests!

opinion

#1

Hi, everybody!
I’ll read your story and give a feedback. Post names and links to your stories here.
I’ll give a review after reading the first episode of your story. But, certainly, I’ll read further if I’m interested.
I’m not a native English speaker, but I will check your writing (spelling/grammar) as much as my knowledge allows.
I’ll send you my review as dm and post its brief version in my IG page (in case if review is positive). In case of negative review you’ll receive only my considerations and advice on improvement as dm.

P.S. Guys, be honest. If you want me to JUST READ your story for it to GAIN NUMBER OF READS, inform me about this at once. But I’m not sure that 1 read will change your life a lot. :wink: It takes 10 minutes to just read your story and it takes an hour or more to read it carefully to spot all possible problems and write a review with detailed explanations afterwards. If you really need my review (especially if you are a starting author) and are ready to listen to my comments, I’m always ready to help. :slight_smile:

P. P. S. You can check my stories “H & V: Fake Friend” (http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6167433466478592, more information is here) or “Love or Desire” (http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6274422373220352, more information is here) if interested. I’d be happy to hear your feedbacks.


#2

Hi! Thanks for supporting. Here’s my story.

[DEMON GOD]
Author: E.Z.
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Ink
Chapters: 8 (on going)
Instagram: @e.z.episode
Description: He starved himself for three hundred years in order to abide by a woman’s promise. Everyone in Devildom is waiting for him to die.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4678673313693696


#3

OMG! I’m intrigued. :slight_smile: I’ll check it ASAP, but it will take several days.


#4

It’s okay! Feel free and take your time : )


#5

Hello! Thank you for doing this.
Title; Distractors
LInk; http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5544763946303488


#6

Hi,
I recently published my first story and would appreciate some feedback.
Title: H & V: Lie to me
Author: Alexandra Mar
Genre: Drama/Mystery with romantic subplots
Description: After only serving 3 years of a 25 to life sentence, Aiden Suarez is mysteriously released. But wait, what’s that? Oh right, “Aiden Suarez” no longer exists.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6378501067505664


#7

Hi

I would like some feedback on this story.

It’s not published yet, so you’d need to click on the link provided below

Thank you so much


#8

Fine! I’ll check it as soon as I have time :slight_smile: Hope you don’t mind waiting a bit :slight_smile:


#9

I would never mind, thank you so much :slight_smile:


#10

Hi, thanks for the support.

I would love for you to read my story and give me honest feedback!

Name: The Good Girl
Author: Lily Stone
Genre: Drama/Romance
Description: Good Girl Poppy is away with her friends for the summer, but the schools gossip site follows them including drama, bad boys and secrets, will she remain good?
4 Published episodes with more to come.

LInk: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5483869789093888

Thank you


#11

I’ll try to check it as soon as possible :slight_smile:


#12

Thank you :slight_smile:


#13

I actually have 6 stories. You don’t have to read all of them, but any feedback on any of them would be great. I will list all of them on here.
I recommend tapping slowly on my stories because if you tap too fast it will mess up the movement/animation sometimes.

Here are the names and links of my stories.
No Longer An Average Teenager


Girls of Earth

It All Started With A Dream

Haunted: The Town Legend

Star Power: Everything Changes

Never An Average Teenager


#14

I would like a review?

Heres my story

Story Title : The Art of The Deal
Author : GraceX
Episodes :
19 ongoing
Genre:
Action/Comedy/Slight Romance
Link
:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4622710791208960
Description:
Romance, betrayal and secrets. What will happen when Isobel gets involved in the black market of the art world and a sexy gang leader?
Insta: epy.gracex


#15

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#16

Hi, my name is Dani!
Here’s my story:
Title: Darkness
Author: Dani
Genre: Romance/Mystery
Style: Ink
Description: If you can’t get away from darkness, you learn to live with it… A vampire story with action, adventure, mystery and, of course, romance!
This is not a cliche vampire story!
Episodes: 7 (more to come)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5439290271858688
Instagram: daniepisodewriter
I hope you like it :black_heart:


#17

Hi, Dani! :slight_smile: I have already read and reviewed your story (Dm “Review of Darkness” of about a month ago), and it is still in my favourites, waiting when I’ll be able to read it further.


#18

Thank you so much! :heart_eyes:
I’ll post the next episode as soon as the background is approved!


#19

This is great news :slight_smile: And your story keeps gaining reads. Keep it up!


#20

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Could you please review my story?

Title: Many Miles and Years Away
Author:Booklady1017
Style: ink
Chapters: currently 6, revamping
Genre: Adventure
Description: Laura, a young woman from 1810 mistakenly uses a magical ring and ends up in 2017. What is the story with the ring and what will she do?