Advice on my final Lineart 😅😅 for HEROIC contest

I’m working on a mafia story (not cliche at all like they both madly in love for no reason or etc it’s a brand new story which I have been working on)
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so I decided to make a art cover for myself and I need ur advice on it (how can I improve it, etc) it’s just the Lineart though.
(also I didn’t drew their faces just yet)
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Nd this is my very first art so please guide me nd please don’t use it for ur own personal things or. Claim it as urs :eyes:


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I was thinking if I should make her left hand holding the gun in normal position rather than on her thigh… Idk

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Wow! This is awesome.

I like it on her thigh to be honest. This is spectacular!!

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A thing though, this is just my opinion I think it would kinda look cool if her free hand was on his neck and she turned towards his face a bit… but you don’t have to do that lol!

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I got inspired by one of the outfits on Pinterest so decided to add the bottom to my outfut​:sweat_smile::eyes:

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It is honestly amazing, how did you even do it? I see you use PicsArt lolll. That’s what I do my editing on mostly

Sorry I didn’t get by her face towards her :sweat_smile::sweat_smile:actaully I just started drawing recently so its tough for me to do complicated things… So I decided to add the simplest thing possible :sweat_smile::sweat_smile:

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Beautiful drawing, but watch the guidelines:

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Haha I added the silver shade text via picsart… I made it in ibis paint

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was about to mention that too, guns are against the rules to have on covers,

yes its a stupid rule we all agree on that

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Tysmmm​:eyes::heart::heart:

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You sure are talented!

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Omg… Y the gun :cry::cry::cry:its a part of my theme… What should I do now

Tysm rose that means a lot me :heart:

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just started. you gotta be lying. no one who just started draw that well. unleash their tracing, which is a form of art theft

I recomand knife, they are not against the rules

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Omg no… I mean by digital art

Okay I ll change it tomorrow

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Even if it’s the simplest things its awesome, and what I mean is kind of have her face turned towards his face just like she is staring at his eyes, and maybe instead of the gun I don’t know maybe do a pen or shield or something

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