Advice to improve story - read proof?


#1

Hi everyone,

I started my story a while ago and I’d like to improve my ranks.
12 chapters are already out, I’m currently ending the chapter 13.

Is there anyone interested to read prood and provide feedbacks to make the story more interesting and so on ?

Thank you :heart_eyes:


#2

What’s the name of the story?


#3

Dancing at the borderlines