Ahh my first story!


#1

PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHAT I NEED TO CHANGE, WHATS GOOD, ANYTHING REALLY!!!
This is my very first story and I just did it for fun but I don’t even know if its good so id really like feedback!


#2

Hey there, we can do a r4r
I will read yours if you post a screenshot or something to prove that you have read mine <3
Title: Love is Lost
Author: Pheebsnomenal
Genre: Drama & Romance
Episodes: 12 - completed
Description: Athena thought she has finally found her true love, but is life really that easy? Her life went from being on top of the world to everybody betraying her after meeting “him”. She tried and tried to get her old life back until she finally met someone else. Will this someone be the one for her? Or will this someone be another disaster in her life?
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#4

I loved this story and the ending surprised me! However, there were some grammar errors, mostly with capitalization. I also think you should consider switching between cinematic and spotlight mode. Otherwise, this story was pretty entertaining. I am interested to see what you’ll do next!!:smiley::smiley:


#5

Hey, can we do a Read for Read? I’ll start reading your story right now. Let’s say we read 4 chapters each?
My story info =

Title: DD: Unpredictable Love

Author: FarrahKenzie

Description: Baby and Johnny are completely different. However, they have one thing in common. Can that bring them together forever? Or will someone get in the way?

Episodes: 4 (Completed & Good length)

Style: Limelight

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6189264065658880


#6

I would like if we can do read 4 read :smiley: I will give honest feedback as well :wink:

“You, Me And The Beat” by Anna

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#7

I’ll do a r4r with you! (It might take a day or two for me because I have work but I’ll PM you screenshots when I’m done!) I was thinking we do 3 episodes each?

Title: Frenemies
Genre: Drama/romance
Author: Metalicious
Short Description: College is off to a rocky start, you’re living with an anxiety disorder, and on top of that, now you’re being forced to turn to your arch enemy for help.
Style: Ink
Episodes: 9 Published, but as soon as one of my backgrounds is approved there will be 13
Link: https://www.episodeinteractive.com/write/story/Frenemy_q5


#8

Hello we could do a read for read if you want :slight_smile:

But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :slight_smile:

Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy

Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 10 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4807228412788736

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#9

Nice job! As promised, here you go! :grin:


#10