Alyssa's Honest Reviews!

Alyssa’s Honest Reviews

Hello, hello! My name is Alyssa. Have you ever written your story and felt like something was just off, yet, you don’t have somebody to help you out? No fear! I am here to help you out! I will review all of your three episodes and give you my honest feedback!

Your story will be graded using a written summary and a rubric I have made. We will go in depth of the grading scale.

Grading Scale

One - If you have received a one in any of your categories, this means that this category is not satisfying to the reader and that it is not sufficient. It should be immediately fixed for the benefit of your reader.
Two - If you have received a two anywhere, your story is getting somewhere, but, it’s not quite as good. There are many things that should be fixed, but some are just right.
Three - If you have received a three, your story is average. There are some things that should be fixed, but it is not immediate.
Four - A four means that you are on your way to do good. There is barely anything that should be fixed and this indicates you are on the right track.
Five - Everything in this category is perfect when you receive a five!

To receive a rubric, you must fill out this form.

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I hope I can help you out!


I would love to!

Genre: Adventure/Fantasy/Comedy (If that makes sense)
Title: Save Me, Hero!
Author: Turtle Cat!
Plot/Summary: After powerless Hero moves from a town where everyone has superpowers, she gets kidnapped by a group of fugitives who are forcing her to join them. What will she do?
Style: Ink
This story has 4 episodes

My Insta is @Turtle_Cat71
All episodes are published.:grin:

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Thank you for making this thread.
Story Title: “I will always find you”"
Story Genre: Horror
Author: Maria.storywritter
Author IG: Maria.storywritter
published: Yes.
Chapters: 13
Story Description: My life takes a dark turn. When I meet him. Who can I trust, Who should I fear? Please help me, someones watching! (MATURE)
Horror/Psychological thriller
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Other Information: Soon I am going to re-edit my story. So I love to hear opinions on what others thought and what needs to improve. That way when I start I know where exactly where and what I need to focus on.

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Thank you so much for taking the time to do this!! It’s truly appreciated :slight_smile:
Story Title: College Days: Campus Spirit
Story Genre: Mystery
Author: Isabella Regnier
Author IG: Don’t have one!
Published: Yep!
Chapters: 5 so far. It says 6 because I accidentally started a new one haha Episode really needs to give the option to delete a chapter!

Thanks for the thread I’d like a review.

Story Title: Too much baby mama drama
Story Genre: Drama
Author: Lex
Author IG: Episode_Lex2
Published: Yes
Chapters: 4 (ongoing)
Description: He has baby mama drama and a lot of it! Will you be able to deal with it or will you find comfort in the arms of someone else?

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Story Title: XENA PIERCE
Story Genre: ACTION
Author IG: @sophiesophilatte.episode

Published: yes
Chapters: 3
Story Description:
An HEIRESS, a DAUGHTER, a GIRL who seeks answers–guide XENA KATSUMI PIERCE as she fights in order to save her mother. Will she make it through? Her SURVIVAL depends on YOU. (CM)

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Thank you :wink::bowing_woman:t2:

TITLE: No Strings Attached
AUTHOR: Alyce Winter (IG: @Alyce.Writes)
CHAPTERS: 3 (ongoing)
GENRE: Drama, romance, mystery … all the good stuff
DESCRIPTION: You decide to get involved with an attractive stranger. What happens when you’re wrapped up in more drama than you can handle? So much for no strings…

My first story, so be brutal! lol

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Here’s mine, thanks for doing this :slight_smile:
Story Title: Dreams and Nightmares
Story Genre: Romance
Author: Dreamer
Author IG: dreamer.episode
Published Chapters: 16 (more coming soon)
Story Description: Scarlet had a rough past and it looks like it’s not getting better after she was bought by some mysterious guy. Will she ever turn her life from a nightmare to a dream?
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Other Information: English is not my first language and this is my first story so the directing gets better after a few episodes. Eps 16 is kind of the end of season one (although I didn’t say it is, but it is a point from where new developments can happen)

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Story Title: Sophisticated & Deceived
Story Genre: Romance
Author: Briana M.
Author IG: @brianam.stories
Published: Yes
Chapters: 19 episodes
Story Description: Ashden, a 26 year old young woman learns that life isn’t about being emotionless and too sophisticated. Will a guy help her explore her emotions in life?
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Other Information: No

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Do you review unpublished stories?

Story Title: Search for love
Story Genre: Drama
Author: S.writes
Author IG: sigma.writes
Published: Yes
Chapters: 18 ( more coming soon)
Story Desscription:
Your life turns upside down when you try to escape from a toxic situation.Can you find the love you’re looking for trying to escape?

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Other Information: English isn’t my first language :warning:

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Story Title: CYBER
Author: Vivi
Style: Limelight
Genre: Fantasy, Action
Chapters: 3 (ongoing)
Summary: You are a gamer with no life. Harsh, but true. With a tournament coming up in your favorite VR game to play, who knows what will happen?

Hi Alyssa! Is there any way I can send you an unpublished story for feedback before it gets published so I can get your feedback?

yes, i review unpublished stories. all you have to do is send me the link! :yellow_heart:

for ~ @gisellec & @whirlwinder


Hey, thank you so much! Do you have an Instagram? @epi.alyssaa

I’ll PM you the link!! :kissing_heart:

This would be so cool if you have the time :grin:
Story Title: The Art of Broken Hearts
Story Genre: Romance
Author: Cheye
Author IG: cheye_episode
Published: Yes
Chapters: 3 as of now
Story Description: You’re a lesbian in college, balancing school, friendships, and love.
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Story Title: Sunny
Story Genre: Romance
Author: episode.penny
Author IG: @rosegoldring.episode
Published: Yes
Chapters: 3
Story Description: When Catrina moves from Cali to a small town, she meets Carter. How will she navigate annoying best friends, crazy older brothers, secret relationships, and high school?
Story Cover: 03%20AM
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yes, of course! the same as my forum username, @epi.alyssaa.