Alyssa's Review Thread

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@Miss_S_B
@Bethany1
@RainbowCat
@JannahJackson
@Farah_DeSantis
@Megz_Episode
@xinxmyxeye

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Could you please review mine?


Tittle: I made the devil cry
Fantasy
Choices matter
Thank you!

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Yep!

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Review: I loved every minute. Although, your zooms were a bit off. Your sense of humor was amazing. It really helped me understand off what more was going on. The music is amazing, and it fits with every scene.

i would love it if you could review mine! thanks so much! :grin:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy (Thriller)
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to…

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Chapters: 5 (More to come)

Full CC/Choices Matter/Point System/Advanced Directing!:blush:

Hi! I would love a review if you’re still doing them please :blush:

Title- Hope Lost
Author- Miss S.B
Description- Life has never been easy for Sofia but this one event will change her life forever. Will hope find its way back to her…
Genre- Drama
Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5589163051843584

Thank you!

I would like one.

I had to stop reading yours… It was Amazing??? You lacked of almost nothing, and your characters where spot on. Your sense of humor amazed me, and how much detail you put into it. From the zooms to the choices, nothing seemed to dissapoint me in any way.

Spotting: Your score is 10/10. Your spotting was beautiful. It amazed me the most. All the detail you put into making you background characters, and how good you placed them. Nothing seemed to be wrong with it.

Character Details: Your score is 10/10. You were so precise and detailed with your characters. The way you let people customize is perfect. And the characters script was beautiful. Everybody seemed to be a perfect fit in each scene I saw.

Plot: I enjoyed reading on to 3 episodes in your story. The plot fit in just right with how you described it, and I was more pleased then ever. NO doubt was that one of the best stories I have ever read. My favorite part was when she got that invitation.

NIce story!

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i’m sorry that you had to stop reading it, i do hope that you choose to continue it again one day! but thank you for taking the time to give me a review! it means so much! and i’m glad that you enjoyed my story! :grin::heart:

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Mhm!

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Here’s mine! :slight_smile:

Title: Adventurous: Project Humanity
Author: Dreamer
Genre: Adventure
Style: Limelight
Description: In a world without sadness, your father starts a little project. What happens when you take part in it? Will you find your place in a world with new possibilities, new feelings?
Episodes: 3 (more coming soon)
Instagram: dreamer.episode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5815192505614336

My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5/6
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288

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Hi, could you please read mine too? - I jut finished 2 chapter. And would like to know abut anything that you sugest to improove before I will publish the story.:slight_smile:

Thank you :smile: could you tell me which zooms did you mean?

Story name Vip Brother:Love is…
Authors name Megz_episode
Episodes 5
Instagram name megz_episode7997
How many episode you want me to review 4 are enough
Description A story about 16 celebrities who enter the house of Big Brother uder 24/7 surveillance for 2 months to win the prize of 500 000$, but before that they have to go through all challenges of Big Brother.
I would like you to promote my story.
Style LL
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Link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4977128782561280
This is my story. I’ll be waiting for your feetback.

I’d love to hear how I can improve my writing!

Title Scars
Author inxmyxeyes
Style LL
Episode 3
Link CLICK HERE

The past created who Eve is right now. Life never goes easy on her. That’s why she became so ruthless to anyone she’s ever met.

Since I have got so many people waiting, I will make the waiting list appear!

Hey love to read yours! im also new here :smiley:

You could read my story its called I Hate Love Stories
I love to hear your thoughts on it and I don’t mind if you DM me on my instagram @mahee._x

Story: I Hate Love Stories
Type: LimeLight
Genre: Romance, Mystery
Author: Mahee
Chapters: 4 (More coming soon)
Summary: This story is about a girl named Zinah and a guy named Zen, they start of as enemies (because for their families) but eventually love takes over! Will your love be strong enough to over come all obstacles that has to come?

:bangbang: LINK :bangbang:
:point_right:t4: Episode Writer Portal :point_left:t4:

:unlock: INSTAGRAM @mahee._x :unlock:

:bangbang: CUSTOMIZE YOUR OWN CHARACTER+DONT FORGET TO PUT YOU SOUND TO THE FULLEST AS YOU DONT WANNA BE MISSING ANY JUICY STUFF :bangbang:

:bangbang: I GIVE SHOUT OUTS TO STORIES I LOVE :bangbang:
:bangbang: DM ME ON @mahee._x :bangbang:
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Title: My Kalona
Genre: Fantasy
Chapter Stats: 9 published
Expected Length: 15 chapters
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4559018983227392
Description: Naomi desperately tries to bond with her estranged father, but becomes the prisoner of a Native-American curse that threatens all. Will her choices lead to freedom or failure?
Notes: Chapter length will vary from chapter to chapter depending on your choices in the game (gain or loss of characters, hidden scenes, multiple paths etc…)

Hey there :slight_smile:
I would love to get a review as well <3

My details:
My Story:
Author: May Laugh
Title: Trouble Twins
Instagram: maylaugh_episode
Genre: Adventure
Episodes: 8 (going on)
Style: Ink
Description:
Danger. Passion. Love.
Always standing up for each other through thick and thin, that is what these twins are all about. But can they really master every chaos together?
Link: [http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5334870588784640 ]

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