If for some weird reason you value my opinion and want to know what I think of your story, drop your details below…
I will get around to every story (eventually).
Disclaimer: I am not some kind of professional reviewer. I will not rate your story against a rubric or anything like that. All my reviews come out more as “live thoughts”, hence the name of the thread. If I see errors, I’ll let you know and if I know how to fix those errors, I’ll add that in too. If you have any questions about what I say or think, just ask and I’ll clarify.
Author notes are my pet hate. If you have one, my advice will always be to get rid of it so you don’t ruin the illusion of the story. If you’re in love with having yourself as a character in your story and don’t want to get rid of it, that’s your own prerogative, but I will still make a comment about it