@mystique_writer - Teacher or Queen? continuation
Oh my god, I can’t believe this is complete now. Feels like just yesterday I was reviewing the first 5 episodes. You sure have been busy 
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Okay, so already for episode 6 I really have nothing to say. Everything was just… perfect? Like your directing was smooth, dialogue was natural. I just have no comments lol
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Episode 7… omigosh, I picked up on the matching outfits before Sally did lol.
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Sally’s character is done very well. Like her personality is very strong of herself.
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I liked the flashbacks. They were so cute.
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I laughed at Theo’s mention of protection hahaha
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Ooof, Sally drinking while pregnant
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So when I had the choice to dress like a mum or dress like a teacher for the game, there was no “are you sure?” option, which I would have preferred simply because I’m the type that tries on everything before deciding lol.
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Your cheerleaders are cute… But there’s something about the way they are scaled on the bleachers that looks off. I think the are too small on comparison to Darja. Same with Sally.
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Also Daniel was layered behind the cheerleaders hahaha. It looked like they stood on his forehead when he hugged Darja
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Loved how Sally actually stood up on her seat.
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Theo says “Not, that I mind” - you don’t need the comma in that sentence
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Nice to see my outfit choice had a nice impact though
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Do I sense something happening between Darja’s fake boyfriend and Daniel’s “pregnant” girlfriend?
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Omg I was not expecting Daniel to flirt with her while technically on a double date! Scandalous
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O M G - so much just happened within 5 lines of dialogue. So first of all General Erle thinks it would be a sin to decline the offer and second of all… it’s not a fake pregnancy, Sally just cheated. WOW. Is your story in drama? Coz if it’s not, maybe it should be haha
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Spotting during the car crash was on point.
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I really liked that the teacher-student claims are actually being looked into and investigated. Even though we all know the truth, this is realistically what would happen in this case anyway
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After the students are interviewed when they’re all outside, Candy is at the wrong layer. You’ll need to bring her forward a few
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Oh that’s rich Sally telling him to sleep in the other room because he drank
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How did Darja get in the house?
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Woah, she revealed herself??? Where will the story go from here? I’m only half way haha
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Omg Erle’s outfit looks so good!
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7 times during one night? Oh my lord, I just choked on my drink
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Oh my goodness, Erle flirting with Sally is making me do this face:
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I feel very conflicted about this sleep-with-me-one-last-time thing… I don’t know what it is about it… It’s like romantic on one hand but then on the other hand… It’s like a weird kind of bribery thing. But necessary because Theo finds them. So I’m not sure…
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Oh he wants to speed up the wedding now? Wow. I have to say this was not the direction I was expecting it to go in lol
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I laughed when Candy said Ben looked nice but not as nice as Theo. Hahahaha
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In the Christmas flashback, to the last Christmas, Darja was sitting on the bed but she was a higher layer which sort of ruined the illusion of her being at the back.
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That felt like a bit of a short episode, but I guess since it’s a Christmas special a short episode is fitting
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The king is wearing the Santa hat after the Christmas episode?
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An assassin? Geez Sally is nothing if not extra.
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When Darja and Daniel walk down the aisle, they face opposite ways once they’re at the end
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Aww I think Earle’s dying scene was beautiful. Lovely last words too.
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Oh he’s alive! Yay
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Oh yeah so what’s happening with Sally and Erle? Because they obviously had a thing but she’s busy hooking up with Daniel currently so… Is that another way to secure her money before she eventually moved on to husband number 2? Hahaha
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Erle… Loves her??? Woah. And then he died for real? Aw that’s a shame.
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Sally is a hilarious actress when she’s talking about Theo dying lol.
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Wait, did I miss something? How did he know the baby wasn’t his?
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Oh she just confessed!
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Hmmm Darja at the doctor’s office… Is she pregnant? Episode tropes would lead me to believe she is
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Aww balloon ridde is cute.
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Wow, I knew she was pregnant hehe. I was not expecting all the extra drama surrounding it though. Another plot twist.
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Alrighty, I’m choosing to be a queen.
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The spotting with the podiums and being recorded was on point.
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Oh Daniel sleeping around montage had me shook. At first I thought it was a flashback of when he was missing Darja, but then I realised he’s trying to fill the void. Aw.
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During Theo’s coronation, when you zoom in, the camera overlay moves after the zoom. It would look better if you had them move at the same time
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What! The end? So they don’t officially get back together? If I had picked Teacher, would they?
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Wow, that bonus ending was a shock too! You killed Darja hahaha
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Just looking at the other ending and Theo says “I want the whole world to know you are mine mother”- mine should be my.
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Ok so they had that awkward situationship in both endings? I’m wondering if that was determined by points. Anyway, it was very interesting to see it as a whole now that it’s complete. Definitely in the right genre because there was tons of drama. Only a few typos and little layering errors, but everyone has that haha. Congrats on finishing it