@Penspaperanddreams1 - Agent 99
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So with the character avatar, my character didn’t show up? I thought this was due to the glitch though, so I tried to exit but it wouldn’t let me without customizing and then it when back to the story anyway, so I have no idea what happened there.
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Ooh, spotlight. It’s been a while since I’ve read spotlight. I know most people hate it, but I find it alright.
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“Hot stranger” lol.
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Hmmm, I like how these points seem to work. I’ve only got one, but a culture point is not something you come across in just any episode story.
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Some of your transitions look like they’re fade ins, when they should be fade outs.
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I mean, the cheating this was kind of expected. But I like how you did it, making MC thinking she was going to get proposed to.
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Well well well, did not see this turning into a heist!!!
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And did not see that plot twist from Luke! I’m really enjoying this so far.
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Police1 and Police2 are not the best display names to have hahaha. Nor is suspect 1 and suspect 2
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Episode 2 felt on the short side, but that might just be the illusion of having a fast paced arc.
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I feel like… if these tappable overlays become a thing, you could totally add an overlay of the red baseball cap so people can actually get clues.
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When Cassidy’s calling, one of the lines she says does not have a capital “I” I tapped too quick before I could copy the line, but it was the second dialogue in their conversation I believe.
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MC seems to be totally ok with her new circumstances all of a sudden. If it were me, I’d still be demanding answers!
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The beginning of episode 4 threw me off. I was so confused. Am I watching the sneak peak for elemental?
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I have a tendency to be an idiot when it comes to writing in answers, so I was just doing stupid answers not realizing it was a password. Haha.
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Wait wait wait. Episode 4 was just a sneak peak? I have to say, that’s not cool. I thought it was going to move on to the actual episode…