@lamecast88 DD: Some Sort of Love
Hey so I’m just doing the first episode, but I see you’ve published so if you want me to do the other two I can, but also you probably want me to wait so it contributes to your retention. Either way, let me know 
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I really liked your intro. It was a strong start. I feel like the splashes outdid the covers if I’m honest because they stuck with the theme more so.
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When the families are standing outside the house, the grown ups look a bit too tall. I know they’re standing far in front of the house, but because there heads are higher than the balcony it throws me off a bit.
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I really like how you’ve done the dance scenes, the close ups are a really great way to include them.
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Billie’s regenning wasn’t the clear. I think instead of a fade transition, one of the other ones might work better to show a lapse of time.
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It was a little on the short side imo, but that’s supposedly a tactic for contests so I wouldn’t worry about it too much.
So let me know if and when you want those other episodes reviewed, because I do want to read on and find out what happens 