So lipstick prop is a hidden feature.
And the kissing scene on the rooftop technically wasn’t a kissing scene, I just wasn’t sure what I should call it. When they’re having a “moment” on the rooftop? You need to add:
@ DAVE moves to layer 2
@ JOY moves to layer 1
Because it looked like they were not actually talking to each other. Same thing in the saying good bye bit.
I am the worst person to give advice on how to promote your story, hahaha. I don’t have Instagram and even for my own first story I didn’t do any promotions at all! It had 11 episodes and only 60 reads for ages.
I think definitely find some other story share threads and get your story out there. With such a complex title it will be hard to remember the name of the story so you need to get your link out there. And I’m not sure if this will really make a difference, but adding the title of the story to the cover might also help. Said story I mentioned earlier went from 60 reads to over 100 seemingly overnight once I revamped my cover.
Also, I love the meaning of the title. So pretty!