@a.d.episode - Providence
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Well, the author note. I’m sorry but I just have to comment on it, because being your first story is not a good enough reason to add one in
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Other then your author note, I liked the beginning. It was all deep and meaningful.
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Hmmm… unfortunately she didn’t kill him? Well, now you’ve got my interest…
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Just letting you know that Dominic’s elbow showed on screen during his shhh command.
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I loved the running down the stairs scene with this new woman coming in now.
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Well, episode one was not nearly enough actually content. I don’t know anything about the plot yet… It was good what you had, but not good enough to hook readers to continue.
In saying that, let me know when this is published, I like your style of writing, just need more 