Hi everyone, and I’ve noticed that there’s this story on Episode and it’s called “And Then We Meet Again”. I must say that it’s really good, but it sucks that it isn’t finished. I contacted the author about it, but she hasn’t responded back. But anyway I’d love to hear your thoughts about it.
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I’ve not really seen the story so thanks
and also welcome
Many stories are not finished, because its hard work, you dont finish a chapter in ten minutes, it can take weeks or more, depending on how much free time you have.
episode is a hobby, people write for fun, but lots of time into it.
for context, this small scene, which just is a tappable clothing choice, has taken me almost an hour. its not even finish.
this scene is less than a minute of actual reading.
Summary
@zoom on 560 353 to 466% in 0
ELIDA (talk_think_neutral)
Wait, maybe she should change she is wearing a nightgown after all.
@cut to zone 2
@overlay ANTI MAGIC DUST create
@overlay 5973885830823936_ANTI MAGIC DUST shifts to 172 335 in zone 3
@overlay 5973885830823936_ANTI MAGIC DUST scales to 0.037 0.037
@overlay 5973885830823936_ANTI MAGIC DUST moves to layer 4
@overlay 5973885830823936_3 OUTFITS moves to layer -15
@cut to zone 3
@CYRENE spot 0.310 162 441 in zone 3
@zoom on 779 323 to 347% in 0
CYRENE (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
I can handle that [JANE] come over here.
@JANE spot 0.301 51 445 in zone 3
@JANE moves to layer 2
@JANE walks to spot 0.301 128 444 in zone 3 in 1
JANE (talk_unsure)
What are you gonna do?
CYRENE (talk_primp_neutral)
Watch the window.
@CYRENE faces right
@zoom on 960 350 to 152% in 0
&CYRENE is feed_give_happy AND JANE is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop
&overlay ANTI MAGIC DUST opacity 1 in 0
&overlay 5973885830823936_ANTI MAGIC DUST shifts to 187 262 in zone 3 in 1
@overlay 5973885830823936_ANTI MAGIC DUST scales to 0.795 0.795 in 1
&overlay ANTI MAGIC DUST opacity 0 in 1
@overlay 3 OUTFITS opacity 0.5 in 1
@CYRENE faces left
@CYRENE moves to layer -6
CYRENE (talk_neutral)
Pick an outfit you would like
@overlay CLOTHES CHANGE SPELL create
@overlay 5973885830823936_CLOTHES CHANGE SPELL shifts to 88 238 in zone 3
@overlay 5973885830823936_CLOTHES CHANGE SPELL scales to 0.195 0.195
@overlay 5973885830823936_CLOTHES CHANGE SPELL moves to layer 5
@zoom on 960 337 to 250% in 0
readerMessage tap the one you like
tappable
“TAPHERE1”{
@zoom on 781 319 to 343% in 0
&JANE is react_startled_surprised AND CYRENE is sing_pop_confident_happy
@overlay CLOTHES CHANGE SPELL opacity 1 in 1
@JANE changes into janefairydress0
@overlay CLOTHES CHANGE SPELL opacity 0 in 1
}
“TAPHERE2”{
@zoom on 781 319 to 343% in 0
&JANE is react_startled_surprised AND CYRENE is sing_pop_confident_happy
@overlay CLOTHES CHANGE SPELL opacity 1 in 1
@JANE changes into janefairydress
@overlay CLOTHES CHANGE SPELL opacity 0 in 1
}
“TAPHERE3”{
@zoom on 781 319 to 343% in 0
&JANE is react_startled_surprised AND CYRENE is sing_pop_confident_happy
@overlay CLOTHES CHANGE SPELL opacity 1 in 1
@JANE changes into janefairydress1
@overlay CLOTHES CHANGE SPELL opacity 0 in 1
}
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Well you certainly make some good points. I’ve yet to write my first story, but I have been practicing.
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