My recommendation for this week:
Story title: Edogon
Author: @DestinysTragedy
Genre: Action
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/r/s/6019343356133376
I loved your intro and to be honest after that I had the feeling that the story was moving a little slowly. But… I didn’t mind it because:
- I was glad to get to know the MC’s personality better, since I really enjoy stories with strong female characters, especially if they don’t fall instantly for the hot guy
- The story has a great premise overall, and you made me excited to see what happens next
With that being said, I’d say the story would be a better fit for sci-fi than for action, but I understand that sci-fi genre doesn’t exist. Why, Episode, why? 
Anyway, after reading episode 5 I feel like more action is coming soon 
Is it bad that I got excited about the words “crazy” and “war” on the last screenshot? 
