If I want to be honest, when Amber shared this story I didn’t want to choose it since it has only one episode out. But turns out it has a great dystopian premise, so I got hooked within two minutes and not choosing it was not an option. I will keep this short because I don’t know much yet, but the plot is really interesting so far, and I can’t wait to see how this is going to unfold. I hope the author continues soon
It’s been a while since I read a high school rom-com that I enjoyed this much, but best friends to lovers is one of my favourite tropes, and in this story it’s really executed well.
I usually don’t care about the characters’ looks, but since Jack pretty much looks like an MC of mine, I felt like he was a cute, romantic version of my baby, lol. But he’s also funny, smart, he is there when you feel down (and brings you pizza), he plays the guitar, and casually forms a sentence using a Nirvana song title. How Gwen survived these three episodes and blushed only once is beyond me.
I wanted to add something else, but I forgot it because Jack was shirtless I have a pretty bad memory.
Screenshots, mostly about Jack, but I promise there are other characters too 😅
So here’s my story: Title: Reality behind Glasses Genre: Drama, Romance Episodes: 4(more coming soon) Description: Layla returns back home to reunite with her childhood friends - disguised as a guy! But on her first day in school, she’s exposed by one of her classmates! [LL,CC, Art,Choices M] Style: Limelight
Hi feel free to check out my story Title: Your Heart My Heart Genre: Drama Episodes: 3 Style: Ink Description: Michelle has never been in love but when she meets a boy with secret past who ends up being her new classmate things start to go upside down. Will her life be the same as before? No cc, art scenes
After reading episode 1, I was not sure what to expect, but I continued reading because I really wanted to find out why Layla decided to disguise herself as a guy. You kept me hanging until episode 4, which was a great job, it added a lot to the dramatic effect.
Now that I know the background story, I think I found a little plot hole, but I don’t think that a lot of people would notice this. Anyway, I wanted to let you know, so feel free to PM me if you want me to elaborate
I have to admit that most of the stories I read are less emotional than this one, but I was in the mood actually, and I really liked what you did because it was in a good balance with the comedic parts. For example, one of my favourite scenes was when Layla was breaking the glasses on her first work day: the way you used the sounds was pretty funny, it’s unfortunate I cannot show it on the screenshots. But I also loved the friend reunions, and I was glad to see that “Stalker” is not that much of a jerk as he seemed to be at the beginning
Omg thank you so much!! . I’m so glad you liked it !
You know, many readers been complaining because I didn’t reveal the reason for Layla’s disguise in the first three chapters, plus the name of the stalker . But I thought like ‘Hey, that’s my story and I like to reveal things at my own pace!’. So I’m really glad since you’re the first one to commend that part, keeping this secret up to chapter 4!
So here’s my story: Title: Master of elements Genre: Fantasy Episodes: 3(more coming soon) Description: Will you and your friends able to save the world from darkness! What past you and him had back 500 years ago ? ( MC: F, points system, adventure, fantasy, mystery and action ) Style: Limelight
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5576198820528128
Oh, this question was asked once and I said I was thinking about under 20K, but now that you mentioned, I will specify this in the OP. Also, I’m not caught up, but I already read some chapters of your story, and in this thread I’m looking for new ones. But thanks for sharing!