Hi! I think you should add more interesting information to hook the reader since the first impression always counts. Tip:Think as a reader write a description that you yourself would find interesting…captivate your audience
For example: Clarissa loses her memory after a car crash. Things get worse when college starts…Clarissa has to deal with college with NO memory of her past! Will things get better?..
Does anyone wanna preview my first chapter? (It’s almost finished, I just need to code the last scene)
It’s good. I noticed when the camera zoomed on Ty, it zoom on his hips, not his face. Did you want this? It is so good though! I need to finish it quickly because I’ve been back at school so I’ll finish that
Losing her memories made Secondary School difficult.
Clarissa believed that nothing could be harder than that.
But will her life be the same when her memories come back?
does this sound better?
Eh it’s not ideal, but it’s fine.
I just finished the chapter, btw, so hopefully you can read it all
I appreciate you checking it out
No problem!
Does it have to be fully published?
It doesn’t need to be complete, you just need three completed chapters.
Ooof i think im going blind lol thx!
Does it have to be college? Can the characters be going to a university instead?
Yes they can.
Anyone wanna enter with me? If yes…do msg me on s_epiauthor
It sounds interesting!
Is it published?
I really like the direction of your story! Creative idea
No.
That is the link.
Sorry might be a dumb questions, but were do we find our username?
Thank you!!