thanks it works
okay first when the person says hello a phone overlay is fading out


Yeah
is that a good thing do u want that?
Yeah I added that
alright the second episode it says theres an error in it, so it won’t let me play it at all. So as episode 3
That’s because I only made one episode
overall theres no errors I like your zooms can u do the same as mine? Mine is called College Days: Boy Trouble
what I mean by is that read my story
Yeah I read it. It’s overall good, but the part where her dad died I think that was supposed to be a narration
dad died?
r u reading the right one?
by Kayla.V
Isn’t it the one where she goes off with her friend to college? And she gets this room, and this girl said, what are you doing in my dorm and it says to be continued
oh yeah LOL
can yall please read my story as well
Title: College Days: Behind Closed Doors
Author: JessDeBest
Genre: Drama/Mystery
Style: INK
Story Description: College is all fun and games until you discover what’s behind closed doors. Students disappear one by one, and you’re going to get to the bottom of it.
Instagram: @iwrite.stories
I can
I’m in love with your sound affects and music, it was so perfect, and every scene. I loved the way you made the characters, it was so funny, the ending girl, making me want to read more
omg thank you! any improvements that i can make?