Hey, I actually got a request! @Jemma1 (Jemma Rose)'s Death by Love (Since my last post, I got to read a heck more entries, and so far nothing didn’t impress me, so much I’m not so I can keep up with all of them )
Right off the bat, the directing is stunning, the opening alone is well-produced. It quickly establishes the protagonist Cammie’s backstory as well, and the premise which the plot unravels from. A lot of characters I like so far, like Mariana the sorority leader and one of the LI. The other Ethan’s pretty cute as well. I just love the psychological/horror Thriller aspects, the intrigue is rightly executed. Maybe I’am just a bit exaggerating since it’s the first time I see a silhouette character in an Episode story, but it is very awesome.
I only found a few mistakes in the third chapter, such as some repeated dialogue between Cam and Noah in the beginning, and Mia being mad at Cammie and inviting her to a sorority party even though I chose to sit next to her during Economics where she told her earlier. Also Ethan had no shirt on during that scene.
Really, though I am very in love with this as well!