Any Beta Readers for Me?

Does anyone want to be a beta reader for my next, unpublished, Limelight story? Just tell me what’s wrong, what’s right, feedback, criticism, and ask questions. Basically proofreading. Proofreaders… I’m having doubts. This is the story info. (No cover yet)
Title: Rest in Payback
Style: Limelight
Genre: Thriller
Description: Death can change a person in numerous ways. It can make them good. Or evil. Other times, it’ll change them drastically. Can they be saved?

Thank you!

Five people read this story?

Look at it like this: YOU’RE GROWING!!!

Growing? The directing?

But my story’s unpublished…

I know. :slight_smile:

I feel like I completely improved on my directing. What do you think?

I’ma read it, I think I forgot. :confused: I’m sorry. :frowning:

It’s ok

Hey people :upside_down_face: