Any good mafia stories?

Hey there, my story maybe isnt exactly about mafia, but the context is the same. It’s a gang story. Where a gang gets some document that is very valuable to a MC and there they make a deal that she help the gang. It’s just a brief explanation but i hope u’ll give it a try.
My story is called Crossroads . You can look it up on the app by writing Crossroads by BlackFox or you can click on this link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4768768117243904
Please do tell me what you think, i’d love some feedback. It’s my first story, and I spend a lot of time on it to perfect it.