my story is going to be this, what do you think about the description?
It called “The Real Face”
You, an amazing, young woman are about to get married to the perfect man of your life, what could go wrong right? Is not like his COLD and STRICT MOM are going to do anything to make him leave you… Right?
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The description left me completely intrigued and I would totally read the story.
Congratulations!
It seems really nice !
It’s really interesting! Good job!