Anybody Mind Reviewing my Story?

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#1

Helllo people! I’m currently working on a story, and I’m wondering if anyone could help and review it,
and tell me any problems or opinions on it. Please tell me if you can, thanks! :grin:


#2

I wouldn’t mind! What’s it called?


#3

I wouldn’t mind either!


#6

Thanks! Can I send the link in PM?


#7

Sure!


#8