💜 Anybody need reviews? 💜 [CLOSED to new requests, for now!]

Hey y’all, I would love to review some other people’s stories in order to give back! I love and will review all genres, and I’m hoping to find some hidden gems. :purple_heart:

I review published and unpublished stories; my only requirement is that your story be in Limelight or Spotlight, since I find it very difficult to get through Ink or Classic stories. My reviews will usually take less than a week; I’ll let you know if I’m backlogged or if it will take longer.

What I do

:purple_heart: Read up to the first five chapters of your story (if you have a certain chapter beyond 5 that you’d like me to review, mention it in your request form)
:purple_heart: Provide constructive and honest feedback. I try very hard to balance positive and negative feedback, but I will be honest if I do see major problems in your stories
:purple_heart: Give detailed, multi-paragraph reviews that cover:

  • story description
  • story cover
  • CC templates (if applicable)
  • grammar/spelling/punctuation/syntax/awkward wording
  • characterization and character development
  • coding (speech bubbles, camera, spotting, overlays)
  • whether the first chapter is gripping
  • diversity/accuracy/realism (especially if your story is fantasy/sci-fi, I won’t be checking if it’s literally realistic, but more whether the plots and events make sense)
  • overall plot quality and writing quality

If you would like a review, please fill out the following form:

Request Form
  • Story title:
  • Episode author name:
  • Story link:
  • Number of chapters you want me to review:
  • How would you like me to send you your feedback (Insta DMs or forum PMs):
  • Instagram handle (if applicable):
  • If I like your story, would you like me to post a positive review on my Insta:
  • Any particular concerns? (i.e., do you want me to pay special attention to character development, focus on chapter 4, play with/without sound, etc.):
Current List
  • Manic - MK :white_check_mark:
  • Curtain Call - ChrissyG :white_check_mark:
  • Poison for your heart - Aykay :white_check_mark:
  • Still Strong - LyraE :white_check_mark:
  • The Interview - Hazeo :white_check_mark:
  • Call of Duty - Katherine Evans :white_check_mark:
  • Squad: Sleeping Dogs - Tuna :white_check_mark:
  • The Flame Between Us - Brianna Cavazos :white_check_mark:
  • Breaking Boundaries - Faith Rose :white_check_mark:
  • Dangerous DNA - Sinead O’Neill
  • I married my troublemaker (limelight) - Miss Deepika
  • Imperfectly Perfect - Michelle Rose
  • Captivating Reactions - Giuliannna
  • The Hybrid Rises - Jackie
  • Treasure In You - L.Q. Walter
  • Arena of Pride - Jelly
  • Quarantine Lovers - Isabela Katrina
  • Squad: Ice Crime - Fiffy
  • Memory lost - Tessa
  • The Bad Kind of Good - Florida
  • Be My Princess - Rahdia
  • Mafia Series: Paris - Summer Knight
  • One Final Chance - Lynn Ann
  • Bullet to the Heart - Eeviee
  • Business Woman - Aliffoen
  • Pyromania -Kristina
  • Squad: Devious Divas - Akilah and Ibukun
  • Who’s She - Alyna M
  • The Unknown - Gazza

Please be respectful; it’s your choice whether or not to implement my feedback, but don’t attack me if you disagree! Follow-up questions or explanation requests are great, but I’d like to avoid any arguments.

If you feel that my feedback helped you, please credit me @calli_epi !

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is it okay that my story isn’t spot light… but is LL

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Of course! Either Spotlight or Cinematic (normal) Limelight is fine with me!

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aw hey :yellow_heart: :yellow_heart: :sunflower: I would love a review!

Title: MANIC
Author: MK
Style: LL
Chapters: 4 with a double release pending 2 approvals
Read-Time: 10-12 minutes/chapter
Genre: Mystery
IG: @mk_words_unwritten
CC: oooh yes
Description: Watching someone you love in pain with nothing you can do is enough to make anyone go mad. But what happens when the madness takes over and leaves you a cold blooded killer?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5905256216199168

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Ooh I love your cover! How would you like me to send you your review?

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Story title: Curtain Call
Episode author name: ChrissyG
Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5225844516782080
Number of chapters you want me to review: 2
How would you like me to send you your feedback (Insta DMs or forum PMs): PM’s plz
Instagram handle (if applicable): don’t have one sorry
If I like your story, would you like me to post a positive review on my Insta: I Would love it
Any particular concerns? spelling and directing
also it’s unpublished

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aw thank you! I love it too :revolving_hearts: I had it commissioned by @MysteryMaker and you can send it to me in dm’s here or on instagram either is fine. Thanks so much for doing this!

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Since my story is quite new I’d love to have some feedback/ a review :yellow_heart::sunflower:
Title: Poison for your Heart
Author: Aykay
Genre: Mystery/Romance
Chapters: 15 (Season 1 complete), more coming soon
Description: You’re a woman on a deadly mission. But what will you do if a determined EBI agent is on your tail? Can you fool him or will you not only lose your freedom but your heart? CM, CC
Style: LL
Small cover:

Large cover:

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6501686701129728

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Can you review my story please?

  • Story title: Still Strong
  • Episode author name: LyraE
  • Story link:
  • Number of chapters you want me to review:
    Theres three out and the others are getting revamped and will be out soon
  • How would you like me to send you your feedback (Insta DMs or forum PMs):
    Insta dms please
  • Instagram handle (if applicable):
    @/Lyra.episode
  • If I like your story, would you like me to post a positive review on my Insta:
    Ofc
  • Any particular concerns?
    Not really

Ty!!!

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Alright, I’ll add it to my list! How would you like me to send you the review once it’s done?

Either here or on insta: @aykayepisode
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Hello @TheCalliope! I would also love a review from you too! :heartpulse::see_no_evil:

  • Story title: Call of Duty
  • Episode author name: Katherine Evans
  • Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5281177222316032
  • Number of chapters you want me to review: 3
  • How would you like me to send you your feedback (Insta DMs or forum PMs): Forum PM
  • Instagram handle (if applicable): @episode_katherinee
  • If I like your story, would you like me to post a positive review on my Insta: Yes!
  • Any particular concerns? N.A.
Story card + cover

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Perfect, added you to the list!

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Looks good; added it to my list!

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Hi! I’d love it if you could review my story!!

  • Story title: Squad: Sleeping Dogs
  • Episode author name: Tuna
  • Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5960964081123328
  • Number of chapters you want me to review: 5 if possible. But I’d be happy with feedback on any amount of episodes
  • How would you like me to send you your feedback (Insta DMs or forum PMs): Either is fine. I’d prefer PM here cause it’s easier to read on my laptop but it doesn’t really matter. I’ll credit you on Instagram either way
  • Instagram handle (if applicable): @epybruh
  • If I like your story, would you like me to post a positive review on my Insta: Please do!
  • Any particular concerns? (i.e., do you want me to pay special attention to character development, focus on chapter 4, play with/without sound, etc.): Character development and/or story/plot pacing, if you could.
Cover

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Haha I think I’ve seen you around on some other review threads! Added to my list, and I love your cover!

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Of course! Added it to the list! :purple_heart:

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Ooh, intriguing title. I added it to my list!

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Thank you for this!

  • Story title: The Flame Between Us
  • Episode author name: Brianna Cavazos
  • Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5005532319514624
  • Number of chapters you want me to review: 5 if you can!
  • How would you like me to send you your feedback (Insta DMs or forum PMs): forum pms!
  • Instagram handle (if applicable):
  • If I like your story, would you like me to post a positive review on my Insta:
  • Any particular concerns? (i.e., do you want me to pay special attention to character development, focus on chapter 4, play with/without sound, etc.): can you please pay attention to/help me with how the dialogue sounds (natural/unnatural) and character development? If you can do you mind helping me with how to make the characters 3D?
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No problem, and I’ll be sure to focus on the dialogue + character depth! I added you to the list :purple_heart:

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