Anyone can proofreading my new romance story? I’ll give credit

Title : YOU DON’T OWN ME
Episodes : 3
Style : Limelight
Story description: run away from home, work as a maid for the most wanted bachelor in town. Girls falling on their knees for him, always get what he wants, but not you and it’s desperate him.
Love interest: 1 male LI
Extra : art scene, point system, full cc

If you do interest you can dm me :slight_smile: thank you

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Are you also looking for an honest review?

Yes please

should I read it and give you my opinion on it? :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

YASSS please

wait is it published already or…

It’s published already, if you can’t tap on the link the video search manually the tittle :slight_smile:

found it! I’m going to read it.

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Okayyy

I just finished reading the 1st episode. I personally loved the style, but I did have some trouble clicking the arrows when choosing outfits (it could be my phone). But I don’t have anything negative to say, it looks good!

Sometimes tappable overlays are hard to tap on it

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Hi, I would love to proofread your story if you’d like! : )
Need a Proofreader or Outfit Designer?

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