Anyone here can take a quick peek at my story

So far, I liked it! The scenes themselves weren’t bad. But there were some things I’d like to point out!

  1. The speech bubble tails are not next to the character’s mouths.

  2. The walking scene was really good!

  3. The texting part was really well done! The bubbles are going out of the phone but, that happens to everyone! :wink:

Overall, I liked it so far! :+1:t5: