Anyone in need of a beta-reader?

[Dragon]

Hey! I know some people here need beta-readers because of either the R&R contest or just for their story. I wanted to beta-read some stories.
I’m NOT a native English speaker, so I (probably) won’t be able to find mistakes regarding English. What I CAN do, is give my personal opinion on directing and storytelling.
I can also just see if everything works like you expect it to work.
I’ve done this before for a few stories.
I’ll take 3 stories at first because it could take some time since some authors need more branches to beta-read (like female LI and male LI branches).
I will be honest with what I think, so if you can’t handle it when someone is really honest, I don’t think I’m the right person for you to beta-read.

If u want feedback:

• Reply to this topic
• PM me your story link (preferably unpublished)
• Tell me either in the replies or in PM’s what you need beta-read (amount of chapters, maybe more branches)
• If it’s for the contest, tell me the deadline for when you need to have the feedback

[Rolayne]

Hello! I am in need of all the help I could get. It’s for the contest. I need honest feedback on the pace, storyline, contest theme accuracy and characters. There are two possible branches depending on the choices you’ll make. There’s also female branch for the love interest.

[Dragon]

Bump!

[TheSunflowerQueen]

I’d love a proofreader for my story. It’s not a contest entry; just a story I’m working on.
I’m interested in knowing if my story is engaging, if you feel that the first chapter is too long or contains too much information, if I ended it the right way… and maybe if there are any directing tips you have. I did notice that I have a directing error in a scene where two characters are supposed to enter a house, but I’m still experimenting with trying to fix that.
I’ll PM you the link of my story. I’ve only written one chapter so far.