Anyone in need of a beta-reader?

I’d love a proofreader for my story. It’s not a contest entry; just a story I’m working on.
I’m interested in knowing if my story is engaging, if you feel that the first chapter is too long or contains too much information, if I ended it the right way… and maybe if there are any directing tips you have. I did notice that I have a directing error in a scene where two characters are supposed to enter a house, but I’m still experimenting with trying to fix that.
I’ll PM you the link of my story. I’ve only written one chapter so far.

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