Below is the link to my story, would someone mind reading the first and second episode, and tell me things to work on/change, or if you liked it even.
I really appreciate this and all criticism will be taken maturely so don’t feel bad if you have negative criticism!
I wish I could but I have no clue how to but I bet it’s awesome honestly have a good night or day
does the link not work?
thank you for your kindess!
I don’t know I am on my Mac book but I can see if you like and it’s no biggie girl and it worked yay and its so far really good I love how you did the blackout background
aww you are so nice! thank you so much!
I can’t ever get it to work on my mac either haha
and honestly I mean i am still playing it and not gonna lie everything looks good I love the" mommy I think I got in connect with et “yes haha” I told him to return home for the second movie" I am dieing I love your humor
aww you are so sweet!
Thank you so much!!!
again no biggie can’t wait for more episode this is gonna Abe my favorite no joke I love ET and the humor is just like amazing like yeass girl honestly. and girl stoopppppp haha
haha thank you!
no biggie if you any other question or whatever feel free to pm anytime not free 24 7 but I am always up for new friendships and such.
same here! You seem like such a nice and genuine person!
thank you haha and you seem like a really cool person honestly
I can help you with critique if you want
I would help, but I’m in a chromebook, so I can’t access it. Sorry
That would be amazing! The link is up top
Would you mind reading the first chapter and then letting me know what you like, what should change, etc.
I’d love to help you!
Thank you so much!
Would you mind reading through the link I sent and telling me what to change and what you liked so that I know what people like in future episodes
Hey, I just read the first chapter, and I wanted to tell you that it’s really good.
Omg its so good I literally can’t find anything wrong with it? I like shorter chapters so the length was fine to me
Aww you are so nice! thank you so much!