Aria’s Honest Review Thread (OPEN, story doesn’t need to b published)

I do, I’m off school for a while rn so I’m still open! :white_heart:

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Thank you for this :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Summary

Form

FORM

  1. Is the story published? YES

  2. How many chapters would u like reviewed? (max 5)- 4

  3. Story title: IF YOU BE MY POETRY

  4. Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6620754423250944

  5. Story cover: If_You_Be_My_Poetry.._posterThumb_iv2Dt6fTs9

  6. Author name: Nush

  7. Do u agree that this is just my personal opinion, u do not need to take it on board but u understand by requesting ur agreeing to not feel too offended for my honesty? YESSSS

  8. Instagram? (Optional) @nushwrites__

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My story is publish
Its called reveal scorn heir

Author and insta line123462
You Can rewiew as many chapters as you like to. I have 6 as of now.

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1. Is the story published? Yes!!

2. How many chapters would u like reviewed? 5 chapters

3. Story title: “In The Steps Of Love”

4. Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6330857938419712

5. Story cover:

6. Author name: Izzy

7. Do u agree that this is just my personal opinion, u do not need to take it on board but u understand by requesting ur agreeing to not feel too offended for my honesty? Yes, of course!!

8. Instagram? @episode.bela

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Sure I don’t mind at all thank you
Here is mine
It’s my first time ever writing a story

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Is the story published? yes

2. How many chapters would u like reviewed? (max 5) As many as you like

3. Story title: I married my troublemaker (ll)

4. Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5041175542431744

6. Author name: Miss Deepika

7. Do u agree that this is just my personal opinion, u do not need to take it on board but u understand by requesting ur agreeing to not feel too offended for my honesty? yes

8. Instagram? @orangeweedie.episode

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Could I just DM you the story link as it’s an unpublished one?

Sure :white_heart:

FORM

1. Is the story published? - Unpublished

2. How many chapters would u like reviewed? (max 5) - 3 chapters

3. Story title: - Raine’s Resurrection

4. Story link: - DMed you the link. <3

5. Story cover: Still in the making, sorry.

6. Author name: YEN

7. Do u agree that this is just my personal opinion, u do not need to take it on board but u understand by requesting ur agreeing to not feel too offended for my honesty? - Yes, I completely understand.

8. Instagram? (Optional) - @yen.epi

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1. Is the story published? Yes

2. How many chapters would you like reviewed? 5

3. Story Title: WiP

4. Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4739868002025472

5. Story cover:

6. Author name: Joanne

7. Do you agree that this is just my personal opinion, you do not need to take it on board but u understand by requesting your agreeing to not feel too offended for my honesty? I do

8. Instagram? (Optional): @epi.joanne

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Pls note everyone! I will b changing the way I do reviews. u will get an overall score, however, I will just bullet point bits I like & bits u need to work on bc sum of the stories r too good for me to break down loads n I think this way it’s easier for u to understand what u need to change.

@thategyptianwriter


Review: 35/50

  • your directing was on point! The use of tappable overlays was awesome, zooms were perfect & generally it was a v well directed story, well done! :clap:t3:

  • I think a ‘tap slowly’ warning is necessary bc I’m a fast tapper & it does cause sum directing issues so a warning would b helpful.

For example

  • in ur pilot episode, the intro is v long. Tbh at that point, I would have let the story. Readers wanna get straight down to the action so clicking thru a v slow, but v beautiful, intro isn’t good for reader engagement. Although u set a wonderful aesthetic w it, it was honestly too slow, speeding it up would help engage ur readers.

  • when the fairytale contest was announced, I was hoping someone would do a sorta Arabian tale & u delivered that awesomely.

  • ok, I found it a little weird that mc started dreaming of having kids & marrying this guy she’s just met. Does she not usually talk to many guys or…? Bc it’s a lil unrealistic to the use her wishes to get a guy she’s just met to fall for her. Idk was it more she wanted a guy in general bc that would make more sense tbh, I might just b misunderstanding lol

-I love the art throughout, that was stunning.

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Good job <3

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Hrrrmmm… can you review mine?

It is published.
I would like the first 4 to be reviewed.
Twin Fairies

Cover:


Author name is Raitlyn
Yep, I agree completely.

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That is if you’re still open :heart:

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Yes! I’m open (:

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Great! Tysm :relaxed:

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1. Is the story published?

Yes!
2. How many chapters would u like reviewed? (max 5)

3 chapters please.
3. Story title:

R&R: Crystal Abyss
4. Story link:

5. Story cover:

Summary

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6. Author name:

Jade135
7. Do u agree that this is just my personal opinion, u do not need to take it on board but u understand by requesting ur agreeing to not feel too offended for my honesty?

Yep! :relaxed:
8. Instagram? (Optional)

@e.p.i._jade
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Thank you!

1. Is the story published?
No
2. How many chapters would u like reviewed? (max 5)
3
3. Story title:
The Billionaire’s Surrogate
4. Story link:

5. Story cover:
In the process of getting one
6. Author name:
Bambiexox
7. Do u agree that this is just my personal opinion, u do not need to take it on board but u understand by requesting ur agreeing to not feel too offended for my honesty?
Yes!!
8. Instagram? (Optional)
Bambiexox_Episode

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Hey @anon71033048
Are you open? I’d like you to review my story.

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I am <3