I do, I’m off school for a while rn so I’m still open!
Thank you for this
Summary
Form
FORM
-
Is the story published? YES
-
How many chapters would u like reviewed? (max 5)- 4
-
Story title: IF YOU BE MY POETRY
-
Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6620754423250944
-
Story cover:
-
Author name: Nush
-
Do u agree that this is just my personal opinion, u do not need to take it on board but u understand by requesting ur agreeing to not feel too offended for my honesty? YESSSS
-
Instagram? (Optional) @nushwrites__
My story is publish
Its called reveal scorn heir
Author and insta line123462
You Can rewiew as many chapters as you like to. I have 6 as of now.
1. Is the story published? Yes!!
2. How many chapters would u like reviewed? 5 chapters
3. Story title: “In The Steps Of Love”
4. Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6330857938419712
5. Story cover:
6. Author name: Izzy
7. Do u agree that this is just my personal opinion, u do not need to take it on board but u understand by requesting ur agreeing to not feel too offended for my honesty? Yes, of course!!
8. Instagram? @episode.bela
Sure I don’t mind at all thank you
Here is mine
It’s my first time ever writing a story
Is the story published? yes
2. How many chapters would u like reviewed? (max 5) As many as you like
3. Story title: I married my troublemaker (ll)
4. Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5041175542431744
6. Author name: Miss Deepika
7. Do u agree that this is just my personal opinion, u do not need to take it on board but u understand by requesting ur agreeing to not feel too offended for my honesty? yes
8. Instagram? @orangeweedie.episode
Could I just DM you the story link as it’s an unpublished one?
Sure
FORM
1. Is the story published? - Unpublished
2. How many chapters would u like reviewed? (max 5) - 3 chapters
3. Story title: - Raine’s Resurrection
4. Story link: - DMed you the link. <3
5. Story cover: Still in the making, sorry.
6. Author name: YEN
7. Do u agree that this is just my personal opinion, u do not need to take it on board but u understand by requesting ur agreeing to not feel too offended for my honesty? - Yes, I completely understand.
8. Instagram? (Optional) - @yen.epi
1. Is the story published? Yes
2. How many chapters would you like reviewed? 5
3. Story Title: WiP
4. Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4739868002025472
5. Story cover:
6. Author name: Joanne
7. Do you agree that this is just my personal opinion, you do not need to take it on board but u understand by requesting your agreeing to not feel too offended for my honesty? I do
8. Instagram? (Optional): @epi.joanne
Pls note everyone! I will b changing the way I do reviews. u will get an overall score, however, I will just bullet point bits I like & bits u need to work on bc sum of the stories r too good for me to break down loads n I think this way it’s easier for u to understand what u need to change.
Review: 35/50
-
your directing was on point! The use of tappable overlays was awesome, zooms were perfect & generally it was a v well directed story, well done!
-
I think a ‘tap slowly’ warning is necessary bc I’m a fast tapper & it does cause sum directing issues so a warning would b helpful.
-
in ur pilot episode, the intro is v long. Tbh at that point, I would have let the story. Readers wanna get straight down to the action so clicking thru a v slow, but v beautiful, intro isn’t good for reader engagement. Although u set a wonderful aesthetic w it, it was honestly too slow, speeding it up would help engage ur readers.
-
when the fairytale contest was announced, I was hoping someone would do a sorta Arabian tale & u delivered that awesomely.
-
ok, I found it a little weird that mc started dreaming of having kids & marrying this guy she’s just met. Does she not usually talk to many guys or…? Bc it’s a lil unrealistic to the use her wishes to get a guy she’s just met to fall for her. Idk was it more she wanted a guy in general bc that would make more sense tbh, I might just b misunderstanding lol
-I love the art throughout, that was stunning.
Good job <3
Hrrrmmm… can you review mine?
It is published.
I would like the first 4 to be reviewed.
Twin Fairies
Cover:
Author name is Raitlyn
Yep, I agree completely.
That is if you’re still open
Yes! I’m open (:
Great! Tysm
1. Is the story published?
Yes!
2. How many chapters would u like reviewed? (max 5)
3 chapters please.
3. Story title:
R&R: Crystal Abyss
4. Story link:
5. Story cover:
Summary
6. Author name:
Jade135
7. Do u agree that this is just my personal opinion, u do not need to take it on board but u understand by requesting ur agreeing to not feel too offended for my honesty?
Yep!
8. Instagram? (Optional)
@e.p.i._jade
[/quote]
Thank you!
1. Is the story published?
No
2. How many chapters would u like reviewed? (max 5)
3
3. Story title:
The Billionaire’s Surrogate
4. Story link:
5. Story cover:
In the process of getting one
6. Author name:
Bambiexox
7. Do u agree that this is just my personal opinion, u do not need to take it on board but u understand by requesting ur agreeing to not feel too offended for my honesty?
Yes!!
8. Instagram? (Optional)
Bambiexox_Episode
I am <3