I have an unpublished story that has just the first chapter, but it isn’t finished.
I was wondering if the storyline was alright, if my directing was good, and all in all if it is a promising story.
If you want to help me, feel free to comment down what i should correct.
Here’s the link:
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Yeah sure, whenever you’d like to read it you can pm me what should i correct or what you liked, if there was anything
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