I’m writing a superhero-themed story for my DL entry (if I make the deadline) and I’m thinking of making the cover myself. Thoughts? Opinions? This is just a basic sketch, but I’ll add color and the title later if I decide to use this. Feel free to go hard on me. If it looks like garbage, say it. Please share tips if you have any.
EDIT: Please check out the poll below to vote on your favorite version.
EDIT2: Cover is complete! Check it out!
Look at you go, making your own art 
I like the cute cartoon style, it’s very underrated! But I suggest fixing her knees up a bit, it looks like she has two pairs of knees; One on the guys shoulders and another that are right above the feet! - <3
Thank you! But I actually draw in a cartoonish style because that’s the only style I know how to draw… 
It looks brilliant!!!
I love the style 
It might be the fact thats its 4:24am for me and I haven’t slept yet so perhaps I’m looking at it wrong.
Her legs look I tiny bit out of proportion.
Her the bottom half of her leg (after knees) looks very far down compared to her thighs (upper half) sorry, I don’t know the correct leg words 
meant in the nicest possible way 
Other than that, it’s freaking adorable!
No, you’re not looking at it wrong. I’ve always had a difficult time drawing legs.
Thanks!
No problem 
It really is amazing!
It is so adorable I wish I can draw like that 
The legs are the only problem though(other than that it is PERFECT) 
Thanks so much! 
Just one question though do you make cover arts or any other arts for limelight stories? Also can I know your Insta?
I make profile pics, but because my art style is very inconsistent (one second it’s amazing and the next it’s a nightmare) I don’t really trust myself with making anything else. I’d love to do cover art for other people one day though
My Insta is @juliewrites.on.episode
EDIT: I’m kind of inactive now… trying to be, anyway
I’ll follow you right away
I’ll be sure to follow you back!
Are you @beam_writes?
yh
i find it very adorable 
! I don’t know that much about the art but ohh well the thighs as everyone said but they do look adorbs & cute (syn. ehh 
) & don’t know MayBe it’s the syringe speaking @ nite for me but the girl seems like she’s standing on him 
! Eeeek ignore me if my eyes are refraining to work properly for me! This is cute please 
! + the cartoon-ish style (akksgss my favooo !) I’m definitely gonna regret this reply because of the amount of lines i’ve written conveying the analogous point 
! Conclusion : Iloveit ! Can’t wait for the finished version 
!!
Thank you!
Oh my God! This is soooooo cuuuutteeeeee!!!
However as everyone said the legs look awkward. Try bending the knees around the neck of the other person and then make the rest of the leg straight till it bends at the ankle ( otherwise it looks as if she has two knees 
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But this is so freaking cute I hate to point out the mistakes.
I wish I could draw like this!
Can’t wait to see the finished version! 
No need to exaggerate, it can’t be that good
Thanks!
This isn’t an exaggeration! (:
It really looks cute and I can’t wait to see it with colors 
Others have already mentioned their observation so I don’t wanna mention since it’s too repetitive audhahs
(And same I also tried to draw my first cover TwT )
its cute . I like your sketch, I think you should use it
