AverysTea's Review Thread

Hey guys this is my story review thread, I will review your first episode or three episodes!

I will be honest!

What I need…

  • Story name
  • Author name
  • Cover
  • Style
  • Description

I WILL ONLY REVIEW THREE PEOPLE’S STORIES FOR RIGHT NOW!

  1. @_Ingrid
  2. @Daddyissues
  3. @Moon_dream

This is not a r4r thread!

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I believe this thread would be better in Share Feedback instead of Promote Your Story since you’re giving feedback/tips/reviews to authors :thinking: :revolving_hearts:

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Hey! :two_hearts: Thank you for this thread! Here’s mine :innocent:

Author: Gigi
Story Title: Where I Belong
Genre: Fantasy
Style : LL
Description: Led by a mysterious force, you end up in a world where ordinary humans are not welcome. What if you’re not that ordinary as everyone believed?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6545619874283520
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The Title: Dirty Little Secret
Author Name : Anongirl
Genre: Drama/Romance/Comedy
Description : Briella Hart, a native Californian new girl in town, finds herself stuck in detention after crossing paths with hall monitor, Grayson Sanders. It’s time for payback!
Episodes : 8
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5833300720615424
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Title: Closed case
Genre: romance
Style: limelight
Episodes: 7 (more coming soon)
Description: you are a successful detective, you have wonderful friends and family. But what happens when you meet your match?
CC, choices matter, points system
Author: Moon :crescent_moon:

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Thank you :heart:

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hey, here is my story:

TITLE: RECALCITRANT DECEPTIONS
LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5483195583561728
AUTHOR: IVYN G
CHAPTERS: 3 (MORE TO COME)
BIO/BLURB: Safiyyah, a mother to be, struggles to suppress the secrets and deceptions she had willing to bury six feet deep. Enter a hectic ride of which four words could provoke utter chaos.
CUSTOMISATION: Yes, but as a side character (as well as choosing the gender and look of your significant other)

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TLdax913

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Thanks for starting this thread. I’ll check out your story. It sounds really good

Here is my story info:

Title: Dark Essence
Episode: 7
Genre: fantasy
Style: Limelight
Instagram: @tldax913.episode
Description: Kadi & Dani have always kept their true selves hidden.But what happens when they discover the truth about their Dark Essence.Will the secrets hidden beneath the lies destroy them? (Point system that will lead to two endings and Limited CC)

Link:
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6025752143069184

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Marshmallow_OEpisode Community Member

11h

thank you for this thread! :two_hearts:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy (Thriller)
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to…

Chapters: 9 (To be continued…)
Instagram @marshmallowo.episode
Full CC, Choices Matter, Point System, Mini Games, Advanced Directing, 2 LI! :blush:

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villy

11h

I’ll add you to my reading list.:grinning:

Here’s my story:

The Antara Chronicles
by CW Vilayvanh

Power is desired by all. Young and old. Rich and poor. A new power awakens and threatens the ‘peace’ of the Kingdom of Antara.

episodeinteractive.com

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: The Antara Chronicles

Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!

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BreAlexandriaEpisode Community Member

10h

Hey everyone! Hope you guys check me out :slight_smile:

Title : For Only You

Description : Alexandria has been held hostage by a powerful man, who is still confused about who she really is. The man’s son comes to her rescue, but he is in for a rude awakening.

Chapters : 7

Style : Ink

Genre : Fantasy/Thriller/Romance

Story Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5067407056830464

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Instagram : @ brestories

I also do r4rs so make sure to follow & dm me! :slight_smile:

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Alys.sa

3h

Thanks for eveyone who’s willing to check out my story! I do wanna mention that I am editing my story because I found a few spelling errors and some of the speech bubbles are off screen. Also, for anyone who wanted to do an r4r with me, I’ll get started on your stories ASAP! <3

CourtnaylolEpisode Community Member

2h

NEW STORY
Story Name: Awakened.
Author: Courtnaylol
Style : Limelight
Genre: Fantasy
Status: Ongoing
Episodes: 3
Plot: Do you believe in magic? Magic is everywhere all around. At least it used to be. Dive into a world of mystical creatures and dark secrets. Discover your past and help save magic!
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Here is mine
Title: Just Another Day
Author: Annswrites
Genre: Drama (Romance)
Episodes: 3(more coming!)
CC: Yes
Style: Limelight
Description: A girl rebelling against her parents goes off to New York City to pursue her dreams unaware of the things she is going to encounter.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6707015823982592
Thank You! :blush:

Thanks for the thread!
I would love a review.

Title: Shado
Author: Roy
Description: After tragedy, Roy returns to civilization a changed women. She begins her crusade, determined to put things right, with the help of her trusted people,waging a one-woman on crime
Style: Ink
Chapters: 5 and ongoing
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5108744574074880

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Thank you I changed it to Share Feedback :blush:

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@_Ingrid
Where I Belong Review

Episode 1

  • I didn’t see any grammar errors in episode 1

  • The description matches what the story is about which is good

  • Your story plot is really good!

  • I really like the intro and how you ended the episode!

  • I will definitely keep on reading your story I added it to my favorites as well!

  • Customization was available

  • Overall: 10/10

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Thank you!!! I’m really happy that you liked my story from episode 1 :two_hearts: I hope it does not disappoint you later on!

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@Daddyissues

Dirty Little Secret Review

  • I didn’t see any grammar errors in episode 1

  • There was this one scene where the transition started when the you could already see the character I’m probably not explaining it right.

  • The plot makes sense!

  • The description if the story matches the story as well

  • I will definitely read more episodes! I will put it in the favorites.

  • When the MC started talking to herself and then the other girl came I found it really funny

  • Overall: 8/10

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Thank you <3 :slight_smile:

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Title: AW: Everything In Between
Genre: Mystery/Adventure/Romance
LINK : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4590429666607104
Author Name CeceEpisode
Style Limelight
Summary: In 2025, heroes all around the world are being mysteriously killed and murdered. Will Lyric and the cocky superhero he hates be able to solve the case? [LGBT/MALE MC/DIVERSITY]
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Hi, here’s my story :slightly_smiling_face:
Title: Living Together
Author: Shonana
Genre : Drama
Style: Ink
Chapters published: 11
Description: Your past experiences with boys has turned you into a misandry. But there’s 3 boys falling head over heels for you. Will you have a change of heart Or end up alone. Choice is yours.

Link to the story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4712860188278784
Instagram: episode.shonana

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Hi, thank you for making this thread!
I’d love if you’d give my story a shot! Here are the details:

Title: Sidereal
Author: aprilish
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Style: Limelight
Blurb: An unlikely turn of events brings Dahlia from outer space to outside Felix’s window. Join them on their star-crossed journey as they cherish the wonders of being worlds apart.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5063859204587520

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Thank you so much! :heartbeat:

If your still doing reviews! Here is my story!!

  • Story name AW:imprinted
  • Author name Mellisa2731
  • Cover
  • Style Ink
  • Description In a world were Vampires and Werewolves are in an eternal war, But they have a mutual enemy, The witches. What happens when a wolf imprint’s on one?

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