^^Bae’s Review Thread^^

#1

Hello and Welcome!!

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To the thread

Sadly, I do not have a story to promote out in the world, so I am doing a review for stories.

Rules:
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  • I Rate stories

  • I only do 3 and up stories. I do not take 2 or 1 episodes in a story. It is unacceptable!

  • Do not create drama on this thread if I do not accept or must put you on my waiting list

  • Follow these rules for a PFP

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Waiting List

Loving Seth - @Bethany1 COMPLETED
Mystery On Hanging Hill Lane - @Marshmallow_O STARTING
Blades Of Desires - @gisellec NOT YET
Benio - @LiaLopez NOT YET
Taken: Dead Or Alive - @Rose.xo_97 NOT YET
You, Me And The Beat - @Anna.writer NOT YET
Be careful what you wish for-
@LunaMarieRose NOT YET
Tribe Of Malapinchi - @JannahJackson NOT YET

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#2

I would love a review

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#3

Loving Seth

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#4

Yes ma,am. I will be review 3 episodes so far and review for you and then read the rest.

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#5

Okay, thank you. :slight_smile:

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#6

Thank you for doing this! I would love a review! :grin::sparkling_heart:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Summary: Time is running out as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.
Chapters: 3 (More to come)
Style: Limelight

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736
Shortened Link: https://bit.ly/2FHhOMS

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#7

Yes please boo!

Story Name: Blades of Desire

Author: Giselle C.

Genre: Thriller

Description: He loves you, he wants you, & he must have you. He will stop at nothing to make sure you’re his, even if it means killing anyone who comes in his way. But, do you love him?

Features: Advanced directing, non-cliche plot line, choices matter, FULL character customization, unique and big closet, POC and LGBTQ characters, LGBTQ option, mini games.

Episodes: 6

Covers:

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Link:

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#8

Hello! I would like a review. :hugs:

Story: Benio

Author: Lia Lopez.

Completion status: Four chapters (ongoing).

Genres: Comedy, romance.

Description:
What would happen if you ship a joyful, energetic, loud girl with a quiet, gentle guy who is willing to play along with her? Join Benio Castillo’s life to find out! (CC)

Link:

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#9

Thank you for this thread. Pls review my story :grin:
Tittle: Taken: Dead or Alive (INK)
Author: xoRoséxo
Genre: Drama/Action
Chapters: 10
Description: Rose & Sophia Beaumont are tough to handle. But what if one is taken and another one has been targeted to kill? Will they able to stay strong? Or love will get in their way? #mafiaworld#girlpower
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5725258112892928
Instagram: xoroses.episode

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#10

Okay everyone, please know that I will be taking my time. And probably finish 3 episodes of your stories in one day. (1 day= 3 completed episodes from a story).
If I haven’t done you yet. Please tell me, or PM me.

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#11

I would love a review as well :smile: (I’m going to revamp my story so don’t hesitate to tell me everything that you didn’t liked)

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#12

Okay you are now I’m my waiting list.

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#13

This is an awesome thing you are doing!
Thank you so much!
I would love you to review my story.
It is my first story so any feedback helps me get better :).
Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
Author: Luna Marie Rose
Genre: Romance
Style:Limelight
link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4755419042480128
Description:
Only one wish changes her life.
Romance, lust, love, drama and suspense.
4 love interests (3 male, 1 female)
Semi-customizable characters
Limelight, LGBTQ

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#14

Feel free to check out my story.

My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Story style: Secret Surprise :wink:
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5/6
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288

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#15

I would love a review! :heart:
Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Genre: Thriller
Summary: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.”
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5933958626344960

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#16

Title: MC: The Bar on 23rd
Author: Dr.Smile
Description: The link between taking action and nostalgia is an odd stranger who seems to poison him with the one thing that sunk him in the first place: love.
Link:

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#17

Tittle : Search for love
Author: S.writes
Genre: Drama
Description: Your life turns upside down when you try to escape from a toxic situation.Can you find the love you’re looking for trying to escape?
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5548786201264128

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#18
Errors (Please Fix)

I hope you weren’t in a rush because that would be very disappointing. :cold_sweat:



It is Mr. Johns/John not “Mr.Johns/John”
It’s ‘days’ not “Day’s”.
And it’s first not “fist”.

RATE:

GRAMMAR: 8/10 It wasn’t the best I’ve seen.
ART SCENES 10/10 The art scenes were amazing. I’m still curious if you made it or forgot to credit. I thought Seth describing her was cute.
RATE IN STORY:
This would be 8/10.
PERCENTAGE RATE IN STORY:
It would be 80%.

FANMAIL:

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#19

English is not my first language an sometimes I miss works. Thank you for your review

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#20

Mhm.