Beautiful Broken Lies (our first story)

so, we have just started writing our first ever story! it’s called ‘beautiful broken lies’. we have put a lot of effort into this story and it would mean so much if you could give it a read :laughing: also, any feedback would be amazing, thanks so much :kissing_heart:

we won’t be doing any read for reads, there’s been too many times where we have read someone’s story and then they have just ignored us, sorry huns x

Title - Beautiful Broken Lies
Author - Hannah & Carly
Instagram - harly_episode
Chapters - 5 so far
Genre - mystery (also a comedy, romance & drama)
Style - ink
Description - Elena’s life seems perfect. Partying, boys, friends, you name it. That is until a dark tragedy changes her life forever. What is the truth? Will it break her?
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Oh i loved the first episode so much!! Excellent start for first story! I liked that there were lots of choices and it was long episode (the first one) :slight_smile: I’m definitely going to read the whole story, keep up the same awezome work! :sunny:

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oh my gosh, thanks so much!! it means a lot :kissing_heart:

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Hello, we could do a read for read if you want ?

But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :slight_smile:

Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy

Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 10 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?

Link :


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we aren’t doing read for reads, so sorry! you’re story sounds v good though! X

Thanks it’s all good.

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