Beauty Within His Eyes 💜 - I'd love some feedback!

I’ve released 6, soon to be 7 episodes of my story! I’m at 50 reads and I literally bawled when I saw that. lol.
People who read it are very sweet and I love the positive feedback, but I would love to hear where it could be better as well! I’m really open minded and I don’t mind listening to some feedback, good or bad!

You’re also welcome to read it just for fun if you’re interested :blush:
My Story💜


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