Beginner needs help with script error! Please help

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#1

Hi there, so I get a script error saying " did you include a choice without a line of dialogue before it?"
I have no idea what this means… i will include my script at the bottom :blossom:

INT.GIRL_CLOSET

@transition iris in black 1
@cut to zone 2
@KIM stands screen left AND KIM faces right AND JORDAN stands upscreen left AND JORDAN faces right AND BRIANNA stands screen right AND BRIANNA faces left
readerMessage Background by @alexa_episode
&JORDAN is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop AND BRIANNA is listen_nod_neutral_loop
KIM (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
Ok girl, time to make you look hotter than Kylie Jenner herself!

label dressinggame_1
choice
“Something Pretty”{
@BRIANNA exits right
@BRIANNA changes into BRIANNA_default
@BRIANNA enters from right to screen right THEN BRIANNA is primp_neutral
&KIM is admire_happy AND JORDAN is flirt_wink_happy
BRIANNA (think_rubchin)
(Do I like this?)
choice
“Wear this!” {
BRIANNA (flirt_wink_happy)
(This is perfect!)
gain Outfit9
goto finish_dressing
} “I’ll try something else.” {
goto dressinggame_1

}}“Something Cute”{
@BRIANNA exits right
@BRIANNA changes into BRIANNA_2
@BRIANNA enters from right to screen right THEN BRIANNA is primp_neutral
&KIM is admire_happy AND JORDAN is flirt_wink_happy
BRIANNA (think_rubchin)
(Do I like this?)
choice
“Wear this!” {
BRIANNA (flirt_wink_happy)
(Looking good!)
gain Outfit10
goto finish_dressing
} “I’ll try something else.” {
goto dressinggame_1

}}“Something Cool”{
@BRIANNA exits right
@BRIANNA changes into BRIANNA_3
@BRIANA enters from right to screen right THEN BRIANNA is primp_neutral
&KIM is admire_happy AND JORDAN is flirt_wink_happy
BRIANNA (think_rubchin)
(Do I like this?)
choice
“Wear this!” {
BRIANNA (flirt_wink_happy)
(Looking good!)
gain Outfit11
goto finish_dressing
} “I’ll try something else.” {
goto dressinggame_1

}}

#3

So basically where you have your label you need to add a script under before the word choice. something like “What should i wear?”

I think that should work

#4

This. Add dialogue before the ‘choice’, like you did with the other ones. For example:

BRIANNA (think_rubchin)
(What do I want to wear?)
choice
“Something Pretty”

#5

thank you this did work, but now it gives me the error which says “label finish_dressing” does not exist? I am very confused…

#6

Put “label finish_dressing” before the part when your character finishes the dressing game.

#7

what do you mean? :sweat_smile: can you show me where to place it please?

#8

Show me a screenshot of when the dressing game ends then :slight_smile:

#9

}}“Something Cool”{
@BRIANNA exits right
@BRIANNA changes into BRIANNA_3
@BRIANA enters from right to screen right THEN BRIANNA is primp_neutral
&KIM is admire_happy AND JORDAN is flirt_wink_happy
BRIANNA (think_rubchin)
(Do I like this?)
choice
“Wear this!” {
BRIANNA (flirt_wink_happy)
(Looking good!)
gain Outfit11
goto finish_dressing
} “I’ll try something else.” {
goto dressinggame_1

}}

This is the ending

#10

label finish_dressing

(continue writing here)

#11

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