Hello again! I need someone to beta read my last chapter before I make my story public! It may have disturbing content, so please do not read if you are easily triggered <3 I want to know opinions, spelling errors, layer error, ect. As always I will credit whoever helps in anyway at the end!
Here is the link, and I thank you in advance!
Hello! I checked the first chapter and there are few dialogues that can be improved. If you want, you can send me a google document that contains your script so I could change and improve some of your dialogues and narrations.
Hi!^^ I really liked it, the coding is really good and I’m curious what’ll happen next!
Thank you so much!
Thank you, how can I share it with you?
First of all, I really like Hazel and Finn 
. They are so cute 
also episode three is really made me curious and excited about what’s going to happen next. 
and also, I’d like to read the whole story when you publish it. But there are some parts and dialogs which need to be improved I guess. For example the Hazel’s and her family’s past part. But I really like your plot and coding. There are tiny mistakes with layering and overlay scale but girl we are all human and that’s certainly normal! 
Can’t wait for the other episodes!!! 
And also I can help and improve some parts too if you want
Omg thank you so much! and I would appreciate that very much!
Alright if you copy - paste your script in google document and send it to my e mail, I can make some changes and send it back to you but you have to change settings and give me permission in google document before you share it with me so that I can write in it. 
My email is absinte.episode@gmail.com you can send it here
I shared it with you, thank you so much for helping me!
Oooh my godddd!!!
Its sooo amazing…i love it…it is too gud to be true…for a mystery lover…i went thru the link so…i dunno wat the story name is…wats the story name?? And…it keeps the cliff hanging!!!
PLS SEND THE STORY NAME!
No problem I like to help people alright I am going to check it and send you feed back as soon as possible
Omg, I’m so happy you like my story! It’s called “Don’t Look Back”. I’m making it public sometime tonight!
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